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Join Date: Mar 2013
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flex fuel..
Im done... with the game, i quit this.
Cant stop the flow of the pain ive witnessed.. I didnt know my brain came equipped with The fuel when i spark the flame its sick kid.. Liquid verses written with a purpose, Sippin on the bourbon when im hurtin. Is it worth it to be burdened by the serpent when im thirsty? I aint certain its workin, Im damaged up, but i still keep thinkin that im man enough To ante up...to make it work.. Im a wordsmith puttin it to paper first.. Holler
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06-25-2013, 09:22 PM
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White Earl
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: Philly Cat.
Posts: 12,354
Battle Record: 10-15
Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x)
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dope flex, good to see you man.
shoulda made it onger, it stopped to soon lol
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06-25-2013, 11:38 PM
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Don't believe the hype
Join Date: Feb 2013
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No-ShOw is elevating his game, cat...this was dope and I like how you got out what you wanted in a few lines...
No, flee the dragon...he is a trap. Seek ye YAHUWAH ya holler bit at the end was wac tbh...lol
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06-26-2013, 09:45 AM
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That wasn't bad at all? Good bars! Had a nice flow and it was a dope read. Keep writing man!
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06-26-2013, 04:55 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2013
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I wanna hear this on audio man. Tight flow, I picked it up instantly while reading.
Drop longer flexes bruh
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06-26-2013, 05:07 PM
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Join Date: Mar 2013
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06-27-2013, 03:37 AM
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Join Date: Jun 2013
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it's ok you sound like you complain alot needs more depth but it was structured good
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Join Date: Mar 2013
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Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: West Mids
Posts: 3,861
Battle Record: 57-49
Accomplishments - 50 Wins
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You can tell this was wrote for a beat. It was a nice, fresh polished flex.
Would be interested to see more when you got it - not much to go off in terms of feed... Would be nice to see you flex some of your vocab skills when you do
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