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Dove Dozer 06-25-2013 09:18 PM

flex fuel..
 
Im done... with the game, i quit this.
Cant stop the flow of the pain ive witnessed..
I didnt know my brain came equipped with
The fuel when i spark the flame its sick kid..
Liquid verses written with a purpose,
Sippin on the bourbon when im hurtin.
Is it worth it to be burdened by the serpent
when im thirsty? I aint certain its workin,
Im damaged up, but i still keep thinkin that im man enough
To ante up...to make it work..
Im a wordsmith puttin it to paper first..

Holler

Geno 06-25-2013 09:22 PM

dope flex, good to see you man.
shoulda made it onger, it stopped to soon lol

Coup 06-25-2013 11:38 PM

No-ShOw is elevating his game, cat...this was dope and I like how you got out what you wanted in a few lines...

No, flee the dragon...he is a trap. Seek ye YAHUWAH

ya holler bit at the end was wac tbh...lol

Advocate 06-26-2013 09:45 AM

That wasn't bad at all? Good bars! Had a nice flow and it was a dope read. Keep writing man!

Fig 06-26-2013 04:55 PM

I wanna hear this on audio man. Tight flow, I picked it up instantly while reading.

Drop longer flexes bruh

Dove Dozer 06-26-2013 05:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Figurative (Post 84711)
I wanna hear this on audio man. Tight flow, I picked it up instantly while reading.

Drop longer flexes bruh

thanks.. this is for an audio actually, and I have more of it, I'll post later.

brokenhal0 06-27-2013 03:37 AM

it's ok you sound like you complain alot needs more depth but it was structured good

Dove Dozer 06-27-2013 07:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by brokenhal0 (Post 85153)
it's ok you sound like you complain alot needs more depth but it was structured good

Thanks for the feed. I wasnt complaining lol.. this was more of a freestyle type flow. Just writing shit down.. thx though

Flow 06-27-2013 11:59 AM

You can tell this was wrote for a beat. It was a nice, fresh polished flex.

Would be interested to see more when you got it - not much to go off in terms of feed... Would be nice to see you flex some of your vocab skills when you do


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