Dominate vs. Strikta - strik wins

PancakeBrah · 07-17-2013, 11:51 AM

Dope battle. Voting from my phone so I can't do quotes.

Strikta
+flush toilets
+child abduction
+Dom capers
-rest in da eyes
-needs air
+/- city bus.

Liked the verse. That opener was dope af. I liked the CBS line because it was worded perfectly but didn't hit hard.city boys is a maybe to me. Liked the concept. But doing two 'fucking your girl' punches in a row was weak to me. Capers was cool and closer was solid.

Dominate
+wallaby
+limited parent
+cholera bout
-buxom
-abort children
+/- strict confidence

Also a good verse. The limited parent company was smooth to me. Buxom could've been nice but the wording was really awkward. Strict confidence could've hit harder but nice idea. Wallaby was funny and cholera was clever. Abort children was statementish and simple and the quote thing was just weird.

EDIT- changing my vote.

I reread each verse after submitting that vote and doms middle section is too weak for me. Strikes punches that hit were more direct. Close ass battle, close enough I had to reconsider.

V/strikta

07-17-2013, 11:51 AM	#15
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	Dope battle. Voting from my phone so I can't do quotes. Strikta +flush toilets +child abduction +Dom capers -rest in da eyes -needs air +/- city bus. Liked the verse. That opener was dope af. I liked the CBS line because it was worded perfectly but didn't hit hard.city boys is a maybe to me. Liked the concept. But doing two 'fucking your girl' punches in a row was weak to me. Capers was cool and closer was solid. Dominate +wallaby +limited parent +cholera bout -buxom -abort children +/- strict confidence Also a good verse. The limited parent company was smooth to me. Buxom could've been nice but the wording was really awkward. Strict confidence could've hit harder but nice idea. Wallaby was funny and cholera was clever. Abort children was statementish and simple and the quote thing was just weird. EDIT- changing my vote. I reread each verse after submitting that vote and doms middle section is too weak for me. Strikes punches that hit were more direct. Close ass battle, close enough I had to reconsider. V/strikta Last edited by PancakeBrah; 07-17-2013 at 11:54 AM.