Dominate vs. Strikta - strik wins
 

@Dominate @Strikta

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Monday,
  July 15th, 2013 @ 11:59 PM PST.
• Check Ins are due Friday, July 12th, 2013 @ 11:59 PM PST
• Voting ends Thursday, July 18th, 11:59 PM PST.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are normally 24 hours
  (unless requested otherwise, that is),
  can be no longer than 48 hours
  and have to be granted by your opponent.

Line Limit:

• Min. = 10 lines
• Max. = 16 lines
• The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 16 lines

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• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
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  means you will disqualified.
• A check in IS mandatory.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
  must match the 1st person's line amount.

Check.

16?

No Aero, Atomic, Pryde, or Gunna votes.

Noone under 100 posts either. Thnx

Yep, cool. G/l

Will drop at some point tonight.

Edit: or in the am, ext if need be.

I'll prolly be a little over the deadline, only by a few hrs though. Hope that's cool

@Strikta I sent 14 to Knuck, I'll add the other 2 tomorrow if you can be bothered waiting, otherwise you can just match 14

So much for that am drop.

Shut the fuck up u stupid bitch.

Will drop shortly @Dom

No Aero votes.

Aww don't be mean Strikt.

Likewise. ;)

16 sent to Knuck... add ur bar. @Dominate

@Strikta @Knucklehead


Girls love my D. U been paying prostitutes for years chump
I get blown by Buxom blondes while u gotta blow Bucks Some to get near one
Fuck ur Australia punches. You’ll rant for hours when u lose w/ them wack bars
& that Wallaby waaaay bigger than any creature you’d find in my backyard
I own businesses that own businesses, so liability stays with the entity
Your Limited Parent Company is why u grew up confused about ur racial identity
Forget ur lame little recipes, ur broke as fuck w/ no dimes at the ready
Only faggot who can cook up a Storm but can’t Weather an increase on the price of spaghetti
Honestly you’re pathetic, & your text is horrible you stupid pilgrim
You need to learn to abort bad concepts as readily as you do your children
I’m famous so my name been brought up. I got that morbid/dangerous look
Strik been brought up as a wigga who claims He came to the battle with ego but might leave with it hopelessly damaged
I can’t guarantee Strict Confidence when everyone knows he’s a faggot
Getting fired & unplanned pregnancies - his life’s not a source of pride for mom
Any time he got news to Cholera Bout she prays a little bit harder he’ll die from one

Vs. Dominate

Ayo

I'm beating Aussies bloody & senseless.. try to spoil it
After a fast right, a left'll land Flush in da other direction like ya toilets
All u drop's stank bullshit so plan to jus' die & lose, hater
I'd Rather not CBS anymore, & I ain't talkin' Dan the retired news anchor
U fell off & became a pedophile w/ a smile so corrupted
Ya skill ain't just a minor disappearance, shit's wanted for child abduction
The 9'll be bustin' & I'd squeeze where u see, inadvertant
My bullets just rest in da eyes, while I can't help doin' that readin' ya verses
Ya lady sports thongs & push up bras hikin' her titties up
She loves when I pull da string to da side then get off, like it's a city bus
We joke.. we laugh.. then she starts throatin' a G, swear
She gaggin' & pullin' my leg, but that's just her code when she needs air
Any heist u'd attempt'll fail & not to mention ur a slacker
If we ever see Dom Capers earn $, it's contract extensions w/ da Packers
Give em' cement shoes.. & give em' a fine visit w/ Christ
Sleeping w/ da Rudd, but noone'll mistake Dom for his Prime Minister's wife

G/l

Dope battle. Voting from my phone so I can't do quotes.

Strikta
+flush toilets
+child abduction
+Dom capers
-rest in da eyes
-needs air
+/- city bus.

Liked the verse. That opener was dope af. I liked the CBS line because it was worded perfectly but didn't hit hard.city boys is a maybe to me. Liked the concept. But doing two 'fucking your girl' punches in a row was weak to me. Capers was cool and closer was solid.

Dominate
+wallaby
+limited parent
+cholera bout
-buxom
-abort children
+/- strict confidence

Also a good verse. The limited parent company was smooth to me. Buxom could've been nice but the wording was really awkward. Strict confidence could've hit harder but nice idea. Wallaby was funny and cholera was clever. Abort children was statementish and simple and the quote thing was just weird.

EDIT- changing my vote.

I reread each verse after submitting that vote and doms middle section is too weak for me. Strikes punches that hit were more direct. Close ass battle, close enough I had to reconsider.

V/strikta

Girls love my D. U been paying prostitutes for years chump
I get blown by Buxom blondes while u gotta blow Bucks Some to get near one
Fuck ur Australia punches. You’ll rant for hours when u lose w/ them wack bars
& that Wallaby waaaay bigger than any creature you’d find in my backyard
I own businesses that own businesses, so liability stays with the entity
Your Limited Parent Company is why u grew up confused about ur racial identity
Forget ur lame little recipes, ur broke as fuck w/ no dimes at the ready
Only faggot who can cook up a Storm but can’t Weather an increase on the price of spaghetti
Honestly you’re pathetic, & your text is horrible you stupid pilgrim
You need to learn to abort bad concepts as readily as you do your children
Getting fired & unplanned pregnancies - his life’s not a source of pride for mom
Any time he got news to Cholera Bout she prays a little bit harder he’ll die from one

Didn't like the quote line. buxom was cool, good wordplay. wallaby was cool. parent company was good. lmaao @ spaghetti. didn't like strict confidence. closer was solid.

vs.

I'm beating Aussies bloody & senseless.. try to spoil it
After a fast right, a left'll land Flush in da other direction like ya toilets
U fell off & became a pedophile w/ a smile so corrupted
Ya skill ain't just a minor disappearance, shit's wanted for child abduction
Ya lady sports thongs & push up bras hikin' her titties up
She loves when I pull da string to da side then get off, like it's a city bus
Any heist u'd attempt'll fail & not to mention ur a slacker
If we ever see Dom Capers earn $, it's contract extensions w/ da Packers
Give em' cement shoes.. & give em' a fine visit w/ Christ
Sleeping w/ da Rudd, but noone'll mistake Dom for his Prime Minister's wife

seen flush one before but it's a nicely worded personal. CBS is played. minor was alright. rest in the eyes was kind of gay. string to the side was dope and clever. eh at the next one. capers was cool, nice nameplay. closer was cool, nothing crazy.

dope battle, close. 6 vs 5 in doms favor for quotes, and some of his hits were harder. striktas pull a string to the side line was dope though makes it an edge close decision but Dom was just more consistently above average

v/Dom

opener, wallaby, strict confidence

vs

flush, bus, pull leg


honestly, very close. dom had some misses and strikt had some played lines which kinda evened it out, strikta's bus line was nuts, lotb for me. dom had the wallaby which was predictable but clever. off impact of quotes gotta give it to dominate, barely.

v/dominate

Was digging the city bus line. Couple cool bars in there but

V dom

Th parent company spaghetti and abortion were cool.

Strik verse was dope but a little less direct.

Ur vote doesn't count. Sorry.

Fuck ur Australia punches. You’ll rant for hours when u lose w/ them wack bars
& that Wallaby waaaay bigger than any creature you’d find in my backyard
I own businesses that own businesses, so liability stays with the entity
Your Limited Parent Company is why u grew up confused about ur racial identity
Forget ur lame little recipes, ur broke as fuck w/ no dimes at the ready
Only faggot who can cook up a Storm but can’t Weather an increase on the price of spaghetti
Getting fired & unplanned pregnancies - his life’s not a source of pride for mom
Any time he got news to Cholera Bout she prays a little bit harder he’ll die from one

only thing i didnt like was the hood quote punch



U fell off & became a pedophile w/ a smile so corrupted
Ya skill ain't just a minor disappearance, shit's wanted for child abduction
Ya lady sports thongs & push up bras hikin' her titties up
She loves when I pull da string to da side then get off, like it's a city bus
Any heist u'd attempt'll fail & not to mention ur a slacker
If we ever see Dom Capers earn $, it's contract extensions w/ da Packers
Give em' cement shoes.. & give em' a fine visit w/ Christ
Sleeping w/ da Rudd, but noone'll mistake Dom for his Prime Minister's wife


dope stuff. found dom to be more consistent throughout with a little better on quotes and that edges it for me. but striks wording was untouchable, just had his share of old ideas that made it a little less effective

v/dom

Buxom
Wallaby
Spaghetti

Vs

Minor abduction
Resting the eyes
City bus




Dope cool battle.

The ones I quoted were stand outs everything else was decent from both tbh.

No big misses.

I liked strik's quotes more tho

City bus line and resting the eyes were my faves from the battle

V/ Strikta

Sorry phone vote

Dom had wallaby, parent company and cholera. Solid verse. Opener was wworded weird coulda been quoted otherwise. Wasn't feeling the rest lol hated the quote line. Solid tho.

Strik had flush, minor disappearance, city bus and the code joint. City bus was crazzzzy. The CBS wp was said on reasonable doubt tho so that's how old that wordplay is lol i appreciate the relevant twist. Didn't like dom capers and didn't get the closer honestly. Still a nice verse with LOTB.


STRIK HAD AN EXTRA QUOTABLE. BOTH HAD BAD MISSES IMO. BUT STRIK GOT HIM. HAD LOTB. BAD STUFF WAS EVEN. GOOD STUFF EDGED STRIK TO MR.

V/STRIK