psychobabble

[NYCSPITZ]

Originally Posted by Pharaohs Army

Loved it...particularly the first 3/4ths...

Thought the end kind of "devolved" a bit into a keystyle about how you can nab young girls and a few flexes...

Whereas the majority/meat of the piece was cleverly done I thought, arguably loosely topicalizing my own life, particularly at the time this was written...so I RELATED to it (how could I not, ffs lol)...and was thoroughly ENTERTAINED by most of it...which is WHY I read & write.
I like reading "real" NYC verses...and I felt that this one fit that bill, regardless of the lazier ending.

***Certainly could be a generic psychobabble verse about any random dude who thinks he's smarter than he is...but I'm just telling you that I related, esp. after our brief conversations/interactions during that year...

SHOW for aowl...thanks, take care

Shiettt

7 / 8 years later

I’ll take it….

[emcee squared]

aaaaaaaaaaand up

[emcee squared]

Like MY NICE REAL COMPLIMENTARY FEED CUNT TOUCH THE JESO THREAD I DARE

YEAH BBS SUX VERITAS SUX U WANTE DMORE
U JUST CANT GET ENF

[JESODIST]

Your introduction...CLOUDING... Whack and Yuck
Your center...TOO BORING... Had to Duck
Your Outro... IM SNORING...What the Fuck?
Yo bro...NOT CONDONING...Stop you Shmuck!
HAD TO BOAST
You drop more shit than a GIANT BUTT
THE RAP YOU POST?
Merely an UNFASTENED NUT to this rabid TYRANT BOT

Just playing fambo. You are a very intriguing writer
Some of your lines are very smart.
Don't take too long next time
Life is too short to not expose your unique talent.
Great writer indeed