psychobabble

Pharaohs Army · 02-22-2023, 04:15 PM

Loved it...particularly the first 3/4ths...

Thought the end kind of "devolved" a bit into a keystyle about how you can nab young girls and a few flexes...

Whereas the majority/meat of the piece was cleverly done I thought, arguably loosely topicalizing my own life, particularly at the time this was written...so I RELATED to it (how could I not, ffs lol)...and was thoroughly ENTERTAINED by most of it...which is WHY I read & write.
I like reading "real" NYC verses...and I felt that this one fit that bill, regardless of the lazier ending.

***Certainly could be a generic psychobabble verse about any random dude who thinks he's smarter than he is...but I'm just telling you that I related, esp. after our brief conversations/interactions during that year...

SHOW for aowl...thanks, take care

02-22-2023, 04:15 PM	#15
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	Loved it...particularly the first 3/4ths... Thought the end kind of "devolved" a bit into a keystyle about how you can nab young girls and a few flexes... Whereas the majority/meat of the piece was cleverly done I thought, arguably loosely topicalizing my own life, particularly at the time this was written...so I RELATED to it (how could I not, ffs lol)...and was thoroughly ENTERTAINED by most of it...which is WHY I read & write. I like reading "real" NYC verses...and I felt that this one fit that bill, regardless of the lazier ending. *Certainly could be a generic psychobabble verse about any random dude who thinks he's smarter than he is...but I'm just telling you that I related, esp. after our brief conversations/interactions during that year... SHOW for aowl...thanks, take care Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 02-27-2023 at 07:25 PM. Reason: *