XI WK VI: Eviction (1-1) vs. Universe (5-0) (UNIVERSE WINS)

brokenhal0 · 01-29-2023, 10:12 AM

what a strange SWERvE

is this AI ? Am i being trolled ? is this two netcees displaying creative genius?
will the future art form of lyricism no longer need a human brain to process
the mechanics of the netcee?! hip hop controlled by machines that don't piss and shit ?! if this season couldn't become any more bizarre considering last weeks Montreal screw job against me with puniverse and vince mcfrank forming some form of alliance ...ill try my best to vote on these A.I verse

Eviction - First off if u literally copy and pasted this whole thing with out adding
anything other then a few words that's A DQ in my book ....if u added bits and pieces to form your story using the program at points it reads like a lyrical screenplay it lacks the darker emotional and impactful verbage you tend to use
but none the less it's good for what it is nothing necessarily stands out but at
times it tends to read deep yet feels soulless good story great imagery , I felt like i was walking with lions in the desert plains it needed more impact but it was a good read...

Universe- I don't know if you also used a ai program or trolled
but from reading your verse it has the typical universe style
so if u copied and pasted this whole thing DQ
props on keeping your character in with the A.I theme the aggressive
pacing the world building and the slick little baby jabs at yours truly
from the beating i gave you last week added to the subliminal humor
a good writer can do that...
you dropped alot of heat this season this one being my favorites
it didn't have the nerdy aspect or the backpacker style cadence
you somtimes use ...the versatility in this was on point
your added depth of tension building mixed with the slick internals
and sublimes made this the superior written in my opinion AI or not

MVGT- UNIVERSE

01-29-2023, 10:12 AM	#8
brokenhal0 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 523 Battle Record: 12-12=4 Champed - AOWL Season IX Rep Power: 3891097	what a strange SWERvE is this AI ? Am i being trolled ? is this two netcees displaying creative genius? will the future art form of lyricism no longer need a human brain to process the mechanics of the netcee?! hip hop controlled by machines that don't piss and shit ?! if this season couldn't become any more bizarre considering last weeks Montreal screw job against me with puniverse and vince mcfrank forming some form of alliance ...ill try my best to vote on these A.I verse Eviction - First off if u literally copy and pasted this whole thing with out adding anything other then a few words that's A DQ in my book ....if u added bits and pieces to form your story using the program at points it reads like a lyrical screenplay it lacks the darker emotional and impactful verbage you tend to use but none the less it's good for what it is nothing necessarily stands out but at times it tends to read deep yet feels soulless good story great imagery , I felt like i was walking with lions in the desert plains it needed more impact but it was a good read... Universe- I don't know if you also used a ai program or trolled but from reading your verse it has the typical universe style so if u copied and pasted this whole thing DQ props on keeping your character in with the A.I theme the aggressive pacing the world building and the slick little baby jabs at yours truly from the beating i gave you last week added to the subliminal humor a good writer can do that... you dropped alot of heat this season this one being my favorites it didn't have the nerdy aspect or the backpacker style cadence you somtimes use ...the versatility in this was on point your added depth of tension building mixed with the slick internals and sublimes made this the superior written in my opinion AI or not MVGT- UNIVERSE Last edited by brokenhal0; 01-29-2023 at 10:18 AM.