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R.Killsbury 3000
Join Date: Dec 2018
Posts: 2,299
Battle Record: 4-25
Rep Power: 8129215 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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RAWN MD --
Very good verse here, It was a good ''SHARK TALE'' -- I really have no critique.. it was really nice. A NICE READ. Good rhyme scheme, and good rhymes. I really enjoyed the read -- nice.. MASTER ROCK -- I enjoyed this piece, crisp writing -- good flow-- NIICE ONE.. OVERALL -- I really enjoyed this battle -- GOOD WORK -- I really enjoyed both pieces.. I have to give it to ''MASTER ROCK'' -- NICE BATTLE.. |
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