Knucklehead 4-4 vs Odd Ways 1-1 {Odd Ways wins by No Show}

Strikta · 07-19-2015, 06:58 PM

BROOO I talked ya batch out the draws easy. Trust me, the box is mine
Cuz when I Conor out the pussy... We'll put on a show bigger than UFC 189
I liked this lol
Went from top dawg to a shaky season. BITCH, ur a soft touch n I mean it
Bro I'll put a dent in ur stomach so deep, the shit could mirror a temper pedic
Ok
LOL @ those childish rants. If I get the signal... Yeah I'll end this hoe
Cuz it won't take a Milonakis head off n dead em quicker than the show
Ehhh a lil forced, but I still kinda liked it
When u choke, u choke HARD. Trust u won't see HOF @ all slime
The way these vets keep u on the ropes... U'd think it was a setup for a 6-1-9
Nice
As far as the crew shit goes, even ya comrades know u can't win
This nigga so bitch made... If he joined suicide squad, his alias would be Harley Quin
Ha
Don't be brash. If u throw the gloves on, it's LIGHTS OUT so call it quits
Cuz ill punch u One Time n leave ya corpse in clear water on some Keith Thurman shit
Ok close

All in all this verse was pretty cool imo.. I haven't really peeped much from u, but u got skills dude. U have decent structure & it makes for a nice easy read.. along w/ some cool ideas & concepts that I enjoyed thruout. Nothing in this verse was really that bad.. the only thing I think u coulda maybe done w/out was the temperpedic bar.. other than that, it was a solid verse bro.

I enjoyed.

Keep at it bro.

Pz.

07-19-2015, 06:58 PM	#10
Strikta 39 NS, lost in votes once Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 11,242 Battle Record: 32-40 Champed - Time to Kill X - Write Week III Rep Power: 84181452	BROOO I talked ya batch out the draws easy. Trust me, the box is mine Cuz when I Conor out the pussy... We'll put on a show bigger than UFC 189 I liked this lol Went from top dawg to a shaky season. BITCH, ur a soft touch n I mean it Bro I'll put a dent in ur stomach so deep, the shit could mirror a temper pedic Ok LOL @ those childish rants. If I get the signal... Yeah I'll end this hoe Cuz it won't take a Milonakis head off n dead em quicker than the show Ehhh a lil forced, but I still kinda liked it When u choke, u choke HARD. Trust u won't see HOF @ all slime The way these vets keep u on the ropes... U'd think it was a setup for a 6-1-9 Nice As far as the crew shit goes, even ya comrades know u can't win This nigga so bitch made... If he joined suicide squad, his alias would be Harley Quin Ha Don't be brash. If u throw the gloves on, it's LIGHTS OUT so call it quits Cuz ill punch u One Time n leave ya corpse in clear water on some Keith Thurman shit Ok close All in all this verse was pretty cool imo.. I haven't really peeped much from u, but u got skills dude. U have decent structure & it makes for a nice easy read.. along w/ some cool ideas & concepts that I enjoyed thruout. Nothing in this verse was really that bad.. the only thing I think u coulda maybe done w/out was the temperpedic bar.. other than that, it was a solid verse bro. I enjoyed. Keep at it bro. Pz.