Knucklehead 4-4 vs Odd Ways 1-1 {Odd Ways wins by No Show}
 

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• Verses are due Thursday, July 16th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
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• Minimum of 12, maximum of 18
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First to 5, win by at least two votes

@Knucklehead 4-4 vs @Odd Ways 1-1

12 is cool

- Pray for the Departed

BROOO I talked ya batch out the draws easy. Trust me, the box is mine
Cuz when I Conor out the pussy... We'll put on a show bigger than UFC 189
Went from top dawg to a shaky season. BITCH, ur a soft touch n I mean it
Bro I'll put a dent in ur stomach so deep, the shit could mirror a temper pedic
LOL @ those childish rants. If I get the signal... Yeah I'll end this hoe
Cuz it won't take a Milonakis head off n dead em quicker than the show
When u choke, u choke HARD. Trust u won't see HOF @ all slime
The way these vets keep u on the ropes... U'd think it was a setup for a 6-1-9
As far as the crew shit goes, even ya comrades know u can't win
This nigga so bitch made... If he joined suicide squad, his alias would be Harley Quinn
Don't be brash. If u throw the gloves on, it's LIGHTS OUT so call it quits
Cuz ill punch u One Time n leave ya corpse in clear water on some Keith Thurman shit

@Knucklehead

he speaks....
 

you had good cadence, humoring setups, coupled with some effective follow throughs mixed with personals. Nice verse

BROOO I talked ya batch out the draws easy. Trust me, the box is mine
Cuz when I Conor out the pussy... We'll put on a show bigger than UFC 189
- fucks with this right here.

Went from top dawg to a shaky season. BITCH, ur a soft touch n I mean it
Bro I'll put a dent in ur stomach so deep, the shit could mirror a temper pedic
- lmfao nice Idea couldve been alil better tho, concept was mean tho.

LOL @ those childish rants. If I get the signal... Yeah I'll end this hoe
Cuz it won't take a Milonakis head off n dead em quicker than the show
- ehh i heard doper milonakis lines tbh

When u choke, u choke HARD. Trust u won't see HOF @ all slime
The way these vets keep u on the ropes... U'd think it was a setup for a 6-1-9
- lmfao nice u couldve made it ode dope'r.

As far as the crew shit goes, even ya comrades know u can't win
This nigga so bitch made... If he joined suicide squad, his alias would be Harley Quinn
- ehh wasn't hittin to me.

Don't be brash. If u throw the gloves on, it's LIGHTS OUT so call it quits
Cuz ill punch u One Time n leave ya corpse in clear water on some Keith Thurman shit
- alright


I feelt u couldve scrapped the Harley Quinn bar and the Andy Mil line and replaced it with material as strong as ya opener, Overall good verse but What im learning now is u gotta chop heads in battles no more haymakers only decapitation lol .... we gon run a muk via Tag team

I'm sucker for a good wrestling line 619 was that fire. Keep writing.

Cool verse. There were a few misses but none of them were too bad. Decent read. Props.

damn
u did that

dope shit odd, my comp keep freezing when i break down some feed so ima keep it short or im pucnhing this thing in the face. opener was dope, andy mill show was fire. your droppin heat for being back for two weeks son. keep at it

BROOO I talked ya batch out the draws easy. Trust me, the box is mine
Cuz when I Conor out the pussy... We'll put on a show bigger than UFC 189
I liked this lol
Went from top dawg to a shaky season. BITCH, ur a soft touch n I mean it
Bro I'll put a dent in ur stomach so deep, the shit could mirror a temper pedic
Ok
LOL @ those childish rants. If I get the signal... Yeah I'll end this hoe
Cuz it won't take a Milonakis head off n dead em quicker than the show
Ehhh a lil forced, but I still kinda liked it
When u choke, u choke HARD. Trust u won't see HOF @ all slime
The way these vets keep u on the ropes... U'd think it was a setup for a 6-1-9
Nice
As far as the crew shit goes, even ya comrades know u can't win
This nigga so bitch made... If he joined suicide squad, his alias would be Harley Quin
Ha
Don't be brash. If u throw the gloves on, it's LIGHTS OUT so call it quits
Cuz ill punch u One Time n leave ya corpse in clear water on some Keith Thurman shit
Ok close

All in all this verse was pretty cool imo.. I haven't really peeped much from u, but u got skills dude. U have decent structure & it makes for a nice easy read.. along w/ some cool ideas & concepts that I enjoyed thruout. Nothing in this verse was really that bad.. the only thing I think u coulda maybe done w/out was the temperpedic bar.. other than that, it was a solid verse bro.

I enjoyed.

Keep at it bro.

Pz.