09-10-2014, 02:59 AM
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#6
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Join Date: Apr 2013
Location: California
Posts: 1,989
Battle Record: 4-4
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- The Ultimate Textcee
- NBL Cypher
Rep Power: 11033512
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Notebook
Good luck!
Better THINK AGAIN before he starts any ruckus, like the U.S vs. Kim Jong-un's army, you dumb fuck
You'll panic when I damage. Have this cunt Re-evaluating Motifs...a little bit of Harmony's Fucked Up
lol longbar swag. Cool concept. Connection is off. Wordplay is cool but they really hate all wordplay here man stop it
Double-Wielded Pistols will end his luck; act like a Female, A Pair'll show him the depths of Heaven, son
Get left disgusting, 'cause I Crop Tops Down to the Belly Button...like Women's Clothes at Forever 21
Semi Miss - not feeling this to wordy
You being hot is a Stage Act. That's your best bet at seein' Props
Your record's a freakin' flop. So, the only time we rush to buy J's is when the sneaker drops
Miss - not feeling.
Fuck the gimmick you're rocking, dude
Fom the City of Gotham? You must be privy to fiction 'cause your identity's COMICAL
Miss - youre better than this lol
On a Dark Night, this Bat, Man....will get rid of this Joker
Split your face like Harvey Dent's from the acid-drip with a blow that could practically make your skull burst...
Miss played
Explanations:
Line 2: Cunt Re-evaluating Motifs = Country Evaluating Motives | Harmony's Fucked Up = Harm & He's Fucked Up
dont do this
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Dagel
I'll bury you without a shovel, leave ya in a grave,
put your head so far underground you'd release a mixtape.
Miss - no.
Nobody wants you on the mic, so just keep silent,
this notebook profiles a creep, he dreams of a lonely island.
Miss - no concept here
Coming with long bars, shit concepts and vague hits bitch,
years of mental scars, a dick complex and gay wishes.
Miss - no punch
You're like Weezy if he tried to make it on a rap forum,
you're a bad omen, killing text battles with crap torchin.
Miss no concept or punch
I handle this bitch like I was sent by the state to terminate,
words like an axe, ripping through your face as it gurgitates.
no punch
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Dagel didn't throw a punch or come with any form of a concept. Not a good battle. Notebook needs to shake the rust off and read around for netcees shortbar style and Dagel needs to throw a punch or a concept at notebook. Notebook takes this for having concepts in his bars.
Vote - Notebook
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