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Old 03-18-2014, 01:48 AM   #9
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it don't happen too often, but ya know when you read somebody's work and be like dannnng i wish i wrote that

this was amzaing

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The moon is inverted. No light, no luminous surface
An anorexic mother earth, a womb without purpose
The opulence of the son of apes reduced to a hermit’s
A fusion of murmurs. A whisper in the Carbyne storm
Under an eye of Ruby makes me miss the starlight’s warmth
A monster. Slithering out of a pool of binary code & metal limps
A fiery rose with petal tips that bite & corrode the pendulum
Poison the sands of time, yet I remember the honor of candlelight
whata bomb of a opening. original, fresh imagery that cut you....a pace that flowed seamless.

dat imagery


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edit: the picture took away form the verse

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