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Old 09-29-2013, 08:05 AM   #12
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I read this a few days ago and really enjoyed it.

::Splitty:: You're style is so refined now.
Don't get me wrong, i love the reckless abandonment of your earlier work but this represents improvement in all area.

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There's no meaning to court from de facto importance.
There's no fleeing the glimpse, manic photo rewardance.
Homo Too Sapiens, beating the spineless chimps
as glowing new radium displays (chromed cesium Timexes)
read a quarter toll, pay it forth, since each little change
is too late to delay. What time is it? Late. Sleep it away.
<3

::Certain:: Don't think i'm familiar with your work but nicely done.

Loved the allusions.

Last four lines were beautiful
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