Cyborganic

[Mael]

Originally Posted by Vulgar

I like that woman in the picture. Is it a screenshot from a movie? That'd be cool if it was a photomanipulation.

A double-edged arrow to the heart of the seed
^This was my favorite line. Interesting idea.

You have a knack for wording your lines well, and also for imaginative concepts placed in concession with one another at a steady pace. You allowed room for your lines to breathe, rhyming them with finesse. I would've went a little heavier on the relationship aspect. There are tons of opportunities for using man and woman in a cybernetic/organic context.

Good work. @Mael

Keep doing you

Thanks for the feed, @Vulgar.

lol.. yeah, that's Abbie Cornish in the new remake of Robocop.