Letterman vs. Touche Guerrero [Letterman Wins]

BROKE LESNAR · 10-02-2014, 12:40 AM

Rebuttal Option

▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

Due Monday 12am PST

Red Soldier · 10-02-2014, 03:18 AM

Here... No rebuttal

Letterman · 10-02-2014, 09:48 AM

Cool

Red Soldier · 10-02-2014, 09:03 PM

then feminine bars ain't hard..my raps'll put a flat to ya vitals
try with yur might all you want..you still flow like a bitch on her cycle

Letterman · 10-06-2014, 07:11 PM

Your concepts are sick but the format wrecks it
Because if wording counts, yours is obviously dyslexic

BROKE LESNAR · 10-06-2014, 08:55 PM

I have Letterman taking this on the strength of his compactness and quick jab. Touche had a bar that was more polished in concept, but pms bars have been used, especially in that manner, way too many times before. A dyslexic bar I can give a pass on, I know Certain used a dyslexic concept but his bar wasn't centered around it. Either way Letterman's was less redundant and delivered rather smoothly.

v-Letterman

El Muffin · 10-06-2014, 10:14 PM

Iono. Not really feeling either entry this wk.

Most notably touche's..the line was qui te dated.

I thought damb near every line u had for Windu was better than thid

Lettermans was kinda eh too..but his was more effective imo

V/ Letterman

Packed Graves · 10-06-2014, 10:19 PM

Old concept missing the witty approach vs meh concept with smooth wording.

Letterman had the better jab.

jilti · 10-07-2014, 09:33 AM

Vote- Touche, just had a little more effectiveness to it

murda sho · 10-07-2014, 09:38 PM

Both were pretty bad... I guess I'll go Letterman for not using a period punch in a more clever way I guess

V/ Letterman

Camp Bell · 10-07-2014, 10:35 PM

hated lettermans basic dyslexic punch. couldve been
better if it had some witty sting to it. didnt really like
touche either cuz of the played, period play but it was
more aggressive and aimed at "hurting" his opponent.

vote: touche

Certain · 10-07-2014, 11:25 PM

Touche Guerrero: This was a terrible twist on a 30-year-old punch line.

Letterman: This would have worked if you had somehow incorporated counting. But you didn't. This was weak, but at least it was an attempt.

Vote: Letterman

Defiant · 10-08-2014, 03:40 AM

Both we're played
But letterman didn't use a period punch so he wins

Vote letterman

10-02-2014, 12:40 AM	#1
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	Letterman vs. Touche Guerrero [Letterman Wins] Rebuttal Option ▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in ▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar) Due Monday 12am PST

10-06-2014, 07:11 PM	#5
Letterman Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 344 Battle Record: 15-11 Rep Power: 374704	Your concepts are sick but the format wrecks it Because if wording counts, yours is obviously dyslexic Last edited by Letterman; 10-06-2014 at 07:15 PM.

10-06-2014, 10:14 PM	#7
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	Iono. Not really feeling either entry this wk. Most notably touche's..the line was qui te dated. I thought damb near every line u had for Windu was better than thid Lettermans was kinda eh too..but his was more effective imo V/ Letterman __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

10-06-2014, 10:19 PM	#8
Packed Graves Name Flips Are Clever Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 9-10 Champed - Alias Tourney '14 Rep Power: 777847	Old concept missing the witty approach vs meh concept with smooth wording. Letterman had the better jab. __________________ back

10-07-2014, 09:38 PM	#10
murda sho Shonami Surf Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,069 Battle Record: 24-16 Champed - Bad Blood II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV - 1-2 Punch League - Shadow Boxing Rep Power: 42758482	Both were pretty bad... I guess I'll go Letterman for not using a period punch in a more clever way I guess V/ Letterman __________________ "aim impeccable if I miss somebody I aint seen em in a while"

10-02-2014, 03:18 AM	#2
Red Soldier T.Guerrero Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 96 Battle Record: 3-2 Rep Power: 0	Here... No rebuttal

10-02-2014, 09:48 AM	#3
Letterman Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 344 Battle Record: 15-11 Rep Power: 374704	Cool

10-02-2014, 09:03 PM	#4
Red Soldier T.Guerrero Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 96 Battle Record: 3-2 Rep Power: 0	then feminine bars ain't hard..my raps'll put a flat to ya vitals try with yur might all you want..you still flow like a bitch on her cycle

10-06-2014, 08:55 PM	#6
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	I have Letterman taking this on the strength of his compactness and quick jab. Touche had a bar that was more polished in concept, but pms bars have been used, especially in that manner, way too many times before. A dyslexic bar I can give a pass on, I know Certain used a dyslexic concept but his bar wasn't centered around it. Either way Letterman's was less redundant and delivered rather smoothly. v-Letterman

10-07-2014, 09:33 AM	#9
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816228	Vote- Touche, just had a little more effectiveness to it

10-07-2014, 10:35 PM	#11
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	hated lettermans basic dyslexic punch. couldve been better if it had some witty sting to it. didnt really like touche either cuz of the played, period play but it was more aggressive and aimed at "hurting" his opponent. vote: touche __________________ get high. write rhymes.

10-07-2014, 11:25 PM	#12
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	Touche Guerrero: This was a terrible twist on a 30-year-old punch line. Letterman: This would have worked if you had somehow incorporated counting. But you didn't. This was weak, but at least it was an attempt. Vote: Letterman __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

10-08-2014, 03:40 AM	#13
Defiant Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,121 Battle Record: 31-50 Champed - Time to Kill I Rep Power: 6442247	Both we're played But letterman didn't use a period punch so he wins Vote letterman