Letterman vs. Touche Guerrero [Letterman Wins]
 

Rebuttal Option

▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

Due Monday 12am PST

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Cool

then feminine bars ain't hard..my raps'll put a flat to ya vitals
try with yur might all you want..you still flow like a bitch on her cycle

Your concepts are sick but the format wrecks it
Because if wording counts, yours is obviously dyslexic

I have Letterman taking this on the strength of his compactness and quick jab. Touche had a bar that was more polished in concept, but pms bars have been used, especially in that manner, way too many times before. A dyslexic bar I can give a pass on, I know Certain used a dyslexic concept but his bar wasn't centered around it. Either way Letterman's was less redundant and delivered rather smoothly.

v-Letterman

Iono. Not really feeling either entry this wk.

Most notably touche's..the line was qui te dated.

I thought damb near every line u had for Windu was better than thid


Lettermans was kinda eh too..but his was more effective imo


V/ Letterman

Old concept missing the witty approach vs meh concept with smooth wording.

Letterman had the better jab.

Vote- Touche, just had a little more effectiveness to it

Both were pretty bad... I guess I'll go Letterman for not using a period punch in a more clever way I guess


V/ Letterman

hated lettermans basic dyslexic punch. couldve been
better if it had some witty sting to it. didnt really like
touche either cuz of the played, period play but it was
more aggressive and aimed at "hurting" his opponent.


vote: touche

Touche Guerrero: This was a terrible twist on a 30-year-old punch line.

Letterman: This would have worked if you had somehow incorporated counting. But you didn't. This was weak, but at least it was an attempt.

Vote: Letterman

Both we're played
But letterman didn't use a period punch so he wins



Vote letterman