ThatLiquidTypeFlow - BeEgEe

beegee · 09-11-2014, 02:07 AM

been repaying old debts and claims of old devils
but I really haven't changed since those settled
still trying to shake frame's with cold metals
turn MC's brains to grains and stone pebbles
ya'll ain't ever felt pain on those levels
mom's tears lookin like rain on rose petals
listen, I'll leave ya family prayin to god
wife won't even let ya kids play in the yard
if I can't find you then I'm layin ya squad
ya best to take a vacation afar
i'm talking space stations and stars
alien nations on mars
make ya whole face change and evolve
my styles ancient an hard
you don't wanna trade with the god
my brain labyrinth filled with acres of halls
pens acidic, so when I write the pages dissolve
spit riddles that take historians ages to solve
a ghost image, my visage, an escape from it all
my reflection in the mirror is the face of allah
im a diety, son of Zues, Jupiter's own
ain't gonna stop till I sit on Lucifer's throne
shit, my love for hip hop even cupid disowned

CopyPat · 09-11-2014, 02:14 AM

fun read, good flow bruh. the vocab was fairly basic but i think this would transition to an audio quite nicely. good clear rhyme schemes

Wise Wiggles · 09-11-2014, 12:00 PM

this was an audio I'm assuming. dizope. sup blood.

beegee · 09-11-2014, 04:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wise Ways

this was an audio I'm assuming. dizope. sup blood.

Always good Wise
This was def an audio I did.

How you is?

trap · 09-12-2014, 08:53 AM

One of my favs in the OM scene returns.

Welcome back.

Enjoyed as usual. Lets hear the audio!

sral · 09-12-2014, 09:05 AM

I thought this read nicely, one of the first times peeping you to my knowledge, but yeah this was cool. Not a whole lot more to say. I hated the bold font on the laptop, it may look better on the phone though so I wouldn't take too much from that.

Keep that pen moving!

09-11-2014, 02:07 AM	#1
beegee Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 32 Rep Power: 0	ThatLiquidTypeFlow - BeEgEe been repaying old debts and claims of old devils but I really haven't changed since those settled still trying to shake frame's with cold metals turn MC's brains to grains and stone pebbles ya'll ain't ever felt pain on those levels mom's tears lookin like rain on rose petals listen, I'll leave ya family prayin to god wife won't even let ya kids play in the yard if I can't find you then I'm layin ya squad ya best to take a vacation afar i'm talking space stations and stars alien nations on mars make ya whole face change and evolve my styles ancient an hard you don't wanna trade with the god my brain labyrinth filled with acres of halls pens acidic, so when I write the pages dissolve spit riddles that take historians ages to solve a ghost image, my visage, an escape from it all my reflection in the mirror is the face of allah im a diety, son of Zues, Jupiter's own ain't gonna stop till I sit on Lucifer's throne shit, my love for hip hop even cupid disowned

09-11-2014, 02:14 AM	#2
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	fun read, good flow bruh. the vocab was fairly basic but i think this would transition to an audio quite nicely. good clear rhyme schemes __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

09-11-2014, 12:00 PM	#3
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	this was an audio I'm assuming. dizope. sup blood. __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

09-12-2014, 08:53 AM	#5
trap Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2014 Location: KCMO. Posts: 377 Rep Power: 14025267	One of my favs in the OM scene returns. Welcome back. Enjoyed as usual. Lets hear the audio! __________________ triplet syllables for minimal criminals.

09-12-2014, 09:05 AM	#6
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,605 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899395	I thought this read nicely, one of the first times peeping you to my knowledge, but yeah this was cool. Not a whole lot more to say. I hated the bold font on the laptop, it may look better on the phone though so I wouldn't take too much from that. Keep that pen moving! __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)