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beegee 09-11-2014 02:07 AM

ThatLiquidTypeFlow - BeEgEe
 
been repaying old debts and claims of old devils
but I really haven't changed since those settled
still trying to shake frame's with cold metals
turn MC's brains to grains and stone pebbles
ya'll ain't ever felt pain on those levels
mom's tears lookin like rain on rose petals
listen, I'll leave ya family prayin to god
wife won't even let ya kids play in the yard
if I can't find you then I'm layin ya squad
ya best to take a vacation afar
i'm talking space stations and stars
alien nations on mars
make ya whole face change and evolve
my styles ancient an hard
you don't wanna trade with the god
my brain labyrinth filled with acres of halls
pens acidic, so when I write the pages dissolve
spit riddles that take historians ages to solve
a ghost image, my visage, an escape from it all
my reflection in the mirror is the face of allah
im a diety, son of Zues, Jupiter's own
ain't gonna stop till I sit on Lucifer's throne
shit, my love for hip hop even cupid disowned

CopyPat 09-11-2014 02:14 AM

fun read, good flow bruh. the vocab was fairly basic but i think this would transition to an audio quite nicely. good clear rhyme schemes

Wise Wiggles 09-11-2014 12:00 PM

this was an audio I'm assuming. dizope. sup blood.

beegee 09-11-2014 04:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wise Ways (Post 400289)
this was an audio I'm assuming. dizope. sup blood.

Always good Wise
This was def an audio I did.

How you is?

trap 09-12-2014 08:53 AM

One of my favs in the OM scene returns.

Welcome back.

Enjoyed as usual. Lets hear the audio!

sral 09-12-2014 09:05 AM

I thought this read nicely, one of the first times peeping you to my knowledge, but yeah this was cool. Not a whole lot more to say. I hated the bold font on the laptop, it may look better on the phone though so I wouldn't take too much from that.

Keep that pen moving!


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