07-29-2014, 12:39 AM | #1 |
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Adverse v. Lyfza Gamble [Lyfza Gamble WINS]
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07-29-2014, 12:55 AM | #2 |
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07-29-2014, 03:24 AM | #3 |
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For a name like yours, you can’t play the right cards, I’m baffled
Can’t even win 50% of his battles, I don’t like the odds on Gamble He’s outmatched, it’s clear, look in his eyes, this faggot is scared This about to be the worst loss in Madison Square since the Mavericks were there We’re allowed to tell fibs, Jesus died for that sin… But if he seen what a faggot he created in this guy, he’d never permit a Ly again Life’s a Gamble….Nah, chill you’re a card, brah It’s more like strip poker instead, watch me take this bitch’s top off You’ve been smitten my friend, don’t ever touch a mic again… Been a faggot since Illmatic, even then Nas knew that Lyfza bitch. |
07-29-2014, 03:27 AM | #4 |
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Vs. Adverse
Tryna understand y u can't hold ur composure.. This an open disclosure Cus your raps suck, It just don't Ad up... & neither will u b in votes when it's over.. This herb is a bitch, quick I stomp.. Murkin em quick Ill rob first all your shit before i fucking converse for his kicks. You'll need medication for this after ur caught faking ur spits Everyone knows aderal talk, maybe u should stop taking that shit. Slice ya Adam's apple, leave this white kike gaffled I turn backwards, An drop verse faster than a Fight Night battle. U don't wanna rap clown, id suggest that u back down Id say Adonis shit again; but thats only wen that member clearing his ass out. Links http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=80643 http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=85312
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07-29-2014, 03:46 AM | #5 |
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07-29-2014, 03:35 PM | #6 |
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Damn this battle was fire. Tough one to call here
Adverse.. For a name like yours, you can’t play the right cards, I’m baffled Can’t even win 50% of his battles, I don’t like the odds on Gamble dope. Liked the flow He’s outmatched, it’s clear, look in his eyes, this faggot is scared This about to be the worst loss in Madison Square since the Mavericks were there sick bar We’re allowed to tell fibs, Jesus died for that sin… But if he seen what a faggot he created in this guy, he’d never permit a Ly again lol funny. nice nameplay Life’s a Gamble….Nah, chill you’re a card, brah It’s more like strip poker instead, watch me take this bitch’s top off cool line, liked it alot. set up could of been worded to rhyme better with punch You’ve been smitten my friend, don’t ever touch a mic again… Been a faggot since Illmatic, even then Nas knew that Lyfza bitch. dope closer Gamble.. Tryna understand y u can't hold ur composure.. This an open disclosure Cus your raps suck, It just don't Ad up... & neither will u b in votes when it's over.. dope opener. excellent use of multis This herb is a bitch, quick I stomp.. Murkin em quick Ill rob first all your shit before i fucking converse for his kicks. cool line You'll need medication for this after ur caught faking ur spits Everyone knows aderal talk, maybe u should stop taking that shit. lotb Slice ya Adam's apple, leave this white kike gaffled I turn backwards, An drop verse faster than a Fight Night battle. creative and witty. flowed very well together U don't wanna rap clown, id suggest that u back down Id say Adonis shit again; but thats only wen that member clearing his ass out. lol funny shit conclusion.. even battle here. excellent use of multis in every bar by both competitors. so the difference is lotb mvgt - Gamble def could go either way. props to both for an enjoyable read. would like to see a 3 way battle with u two and myself Last edited by jilti; 07-29-2014 at 03:41 PM. |
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07-30-2014, 04:25 AM | #8 |
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I got gamble taking this in a pretty onesided battle adverse didnt have anything at all whereas gamble came a bit better even tho most of his lines could have done with a bit of editing to make them more personal
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For a name like yours, you can’t play the right cards, I’m baffled
Can’t even win 50% of his battles, I don’t like the odds on Gamble Nameplay, pun, and a factual personal He’s outmatched, it’s clear, look in his eyes, this faggot is scared This about to be the worst loss in Madison Square since the Mavericks were there We’re allowed to tell fibs, Jesus died for that sin… But if he seen what a faggot he created in this guy, he’d never permit a Ly again Life’s a Gamble….Nah, chill you’re a card, brah It’s more like strip poker instead, watch me take this bitch’s top off More play from the name, a dope turn of phrase You’ve been smitten my friend, don’t ever touch a mic again… Been a faggot since Illmatic, even then Nas knew that Lyfza bitch. The ultimate nameplay, using an Illmatic refernce Tryna understand y u can't hold ur composure.. This an open disclosure Cus your raps suck, It just don't Ad up... & neither will u b in votes when it's over.. That nameplay could've been dope, but the faulty grammar just doesnt allow that to flow smootly This herb is a bitch, quick I stomp.. Murkin em quick Ill rob first all your shit before i fucking converse for his kicks. You'll need medication for this after ur caught faking ur spits Everyone knows aderal talk, maybe u should stop taking that shit. Again some naemplay that could've worked out, this time, the setup just wasn't nice. Slice ya Adam's apple, leave this white kike gaffled I turn backwards, An drop verse faster than a Fight Night battle. U don't wanna rap clown, id suggest that u back down Id say Adonis shit again; but thats only wen that member clearing his ass out. I honestly don't see how this was a close battle. I understand that this isn't english class, so I don't want to hear that excuse from anybody. The spelling and grammar were appalling. You're an emcee, take some pride in your craft. Overall the bad grammar and sloppy transitions kept it from being competitive. |
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We’re allowed to tell fibs, Jesus died for that sin…
But if he seen what a faggot he created in this guy, he’d never permit a Ly again vs This herb is a bitch, quick I stomp.. Murkin em quick Ill rob first all your shit before i fucking converse for his kicks. Slice ya Adam's apple, leave this white kike gaffled I turn backwards, An drop verse faster than a Fight Night battle. this was dope. i read ad's and was like, shit! then i got to gambles and was like OH SHIT....both had a good clean verse, but what took it for me was gamble's NP's were crazy!!!! cant take anything from ad tho, his shit was nice but those nameplays was just too much for me. great battle from both. vote: gamble
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08-06-2014, 02:19 PM | #11 |
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50% of ya battles, Ly again
Vs Converse, fight night, aderal talk This was a cool battle. I've got gamble taking this by a quote but aside from that I think his misses were a bit better as well. Props to both. V/Gamble |
08-06-2014, 04:10 PM | #12 |
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08-06-2014, 09:48 PM | #13 |
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Vs Aderal talk Adverse had a lot of cool ideas just didn't execute any of them to the best of his ability Gamble had a few decent hits in there and it was enough for him to take this one V/ gamble
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