Adverse v. Lyfza Gamble [Lyfza Gamble WINS]
 

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Vote links:
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=85419
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=84869

For a name like yours, you can’t play the right cards, I’m baffled
Can’t even win 50% of his battles, I don’t like the odds on Gamble
He’s outmatched, it’s clear, look in his eyes, this faggot is scared
This about to be the worst loss in Madison Square since the Mavericks were there
We’re allowed to tell fibs, Jesus died for that sin…
But if he seen what a faggot he created in this guy, he’d never permit a Ly again
Life’s a Gamble….Nah, chill you’re a card, brah
It’s more like strip poker instead, watch me take this bitch’s top off
You’ve been smitten my friend, don’t ever touch a mic again…
Been a faggot since Illmatic, even then Nas knew that Lyfza bitch.

Vs. Adverse

Tryna understand y u can't hold ur composure.. This an open disclosure
Cus your raps suck, It just don't Ad up... & neither will u b in votes when it's over..
This herb is a bitch, quick I stomp.. Murkin em quick
Ill rob first all your shit before i fucking converse for his kicks.
You'll need medication for this after ur caught faking ur spits
Everyone knows aderal talk, maybe u should stop taking that shit.
Slice ya Adam's apple, leave this white kike gaffled
I turn backwards, An drop verse faster than a Fight Night battle.
U don't wanna rap clown, id suggest that u back down
Id say Adonis shit again; but thats only wen that member clearing his ass out.



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http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=85312

Cleaned. Links Please. Open for votes.

Damn this battle was fire. Tough one to call here

Adverse..

For a name like yours, you can’t play the right cards, I’m baffled
Can’t even win 50% of his battles, I don’t like the odds on Gamble
dope. Liked the flow
He’s outmatched, it’s clear, look in his eyes, this faggot is scared
This about to be the worst loss in Madison Square since the Mavericks were there
sick bar
We’re allowed to tell fibs, Jesus died for that sin…
But if he seen what a faggot he created in this guy, he’d never permit a Ly again
lol funny. nice nameplay
Life’s a Gamble….Nah, chill you’re a card, brah
It’s more like strip poker instead, watch me take this bitch’s top off
cool line, liked it alot. set up could of been worded to rhyme better with punch
You’ve been smitten my friend, don’t ever touch a mic again…
Been a faggot since Illmatic, even then Nas knew that Lyfza bitch.
dope closer


Gamble..

Tryna understand y u can't hold ur composure.. This an open disclosure
Cus your raps suck, It just don't Ad up... & neither will u b in votes when it's over..
dope opener. excellent use of multis
This herb is a bitch, quick I stomp.. Murkin em quick
Ill rob first all your shit before i fucking converse for his kicks.
cool line
You'll need medication for this after ur caught faking ur spits
Everyone knows aderal talk, maybe u should stop taking that shit.
lotb
Slice ya Adam's apple, leave this white kike gaffled
I turn backwards, An drop verse faster than a Fight Night battle.
creative and witty. flowed very well together
U don't wanna rap clown, id suggest that u back down
Id say Adonis shit again; but thats only wen that member clearing his ass out.
lol funny shit


conclusion..
even battle here. excellent use of multis in every bar by both competitors. so the difference is lotb
mvgt - Gamble
def could go either way. props to both for an enjoyable read. would like to see a 3 way battle with u two and myself

Thanks g. 1-0

I got gamble taking this in a pretty onesided battle adverse didnt have anything at all whereas gamble came a bit better even tho most of his lines could have done with a bit of editing to make them more personal

For a name like yours, you can’t play the right cards, I’m baffled
Can’t even win 50% of his battles, I don’t like the odds on Gamble
Nameplay, pun, and a factual personal
He’s outmatched, it’s clear, look in his eyes, this faggot is scared
This about to be the worst loss in Madison Square since the Mavericks were there
We’re allowed to tell fibs, Jesus died for that sin…
But if he seen what a faggot he created in this guy, he’d never permit a Ly again
Life’s a Gamble….Nah, chill you’re a card, brah
It’s more like strip poker instead, watch me take this bitch’s top off
More play from the name, a dope turn of phrase
You’ve been smitten my friend, don’t ever touch a mic again…
Been a faggot since Illmatic, even then Nas knew that Lyfza bitch.
The ultimate nameplay, using an Illmatic refernce

Tryna understand y u can't hold ur composure.. This an open disclosure
Cus your raps suck, It just don't Ad up... & neither will u b in votes when it's over..
That nameplay could've been dope, but the faulty grammar just doesnt allow that to flow smootly
This herb is a bitch, quick I stomp.. Murkin em quick
Ill rob first all your shit before i fucking converse for his kicks.
You'll need medication for this after ur caught faking ur spits
Everyone knows aderal talk, maybe u should stop taking that shit.
Again some naemplay that could've worked out, this time, the setup just wasn't nice.
Slice ya Adam's apple, leave this white kike gaffled
I turn backwards, An drop verse faster than a Fight Night battle.
U don't wanna rap clown, id suggest that u back down
Id say Adonis shit again; but thats only wen that member clearing his ass out.

I honestly don't see how this was a close battle. I understand that this isn't english class, so I don't want to hear that excuse from anybody. The spelling and grammar were appalling. You're an emcee, take some pride in your craft. Overall the bad grammar and sloppy transitions kept it from being competitive.

We’re allowed to tell fibs, Jesus died for that sin…
But if he seen what a faggot he created in this guy, he’d never permit a Ly again


vs


This herb is a bitch, quick I stomp.. Murkin em quick
Ill rob first all your shit before i fucking converse for his kicks.

Slice ya Adam's apple, leave this white kike gaffled
I turn backwards, An drop verse faster than a Fight Night battle.



this was dope. i read ad's and was like, shit! then i got to gambles
and was like OH SHIT....both had a good clean verse, but what took
it for me was gamble's NP's were crazy!!!! cant take anything from
ad tho, his shit was nice but those nameplays was just too much for
me. great battle from both.


vote: gamble

50% of ya battles, Ly again

Vs

Converse, fight night, aderal talk

This was a cool battle. I've got gamble taking this by a quote but aside from that I think his misses were a bit better as well. Props to both.

V/Gamble

Lyfza Gamble 4-1

Na

Vs

Aderal talk

Adverse had a lot of cool ideas just didn't execute any of them to the best of his ability

Gamble had a few decent hits in there and it was enough for him to take this one

V/ gamble

Close this. Good battle @Adverse

Gamble wins

+7 pts