Gazette vs Atomic - GAZETTE WINS 5-2

[Atomic]

10 lines due now/like 2 hours tops.

gl, check in
@Gazette

[Gazette]

check, g'luck

[Atomic]

bitch i'm godly i floss, it's clear you're hardly a boss.
he'd have to write for a newspaper for gazette to take a girls clothing articles off.
he has lesbian tendencies, yup this sickos a dyke,
last time this fgt had a cool flip was with his pillow @ night.
god has entered the building, bitch. it's time to honor,
if this retard got CrayOn a verse, i'll make sure to write mine in marker.
just kill yourself quick or i'll murder you slut,
retard ur clearly low tear - now please try some vertical cuts.
guns cocked don't run off, i'll blast this fag,
cuz u'll get Bar`d for ripping ME off, like a mattress tag.

[Gazette]

You're abnormally wack, you're sort of a dwarf in proportion to Gaz ...
Cus Imma knock you out with *1 punch, 'Mick* like the Irish brawler in Snatch (1-punch Mickey yh?)
Get to chalkin' his ass, got more genius bars than this bastard can fathom
It's a classic reaction, you'll be callin' me Einstein how I'm smashing an Atom
Lacking the action, but you'll 'get the hang of it' when I put the rope to your throat
This league - a bitch league, aint goin' for gold, after this we'll be seeing *At' less* all 'over the globe'
No surprise a jokers a joke, even with women you aint got the shakers kid
You still aiming for bases bitch, n a little 'horseplay' don't count as a 'stable relationship'
Refraining to rate the prick, he's just a vague number like abstractions of Pi ...
Cus if you think Atom's bombing me ... that's one 'mushroom' i'm happy to try

pce, g'luck

[Gazette]

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=7998

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=6497

[Atomic]

yep yep gl.

[Objective]

he'd have to write for a newspaper for gazette to take a girls clothing articles off.

vs

Get to chalkin' his ass, got more genius bars than this bastard can fathom
It's a classic reaction, you'll be callin' me Einstein how I'm smashing an Atom
No surprise a jokers a joke, even with women you aint got the shakers kid
You still aiming for bases bitch, n a little 'horseplay' don't count as a 'stable relationship'
Refraining to rate the prick, he's just a vague number like abstractions of Pi ...
Cus if you think Atom's bombing me ... that's one 'mushroom' i'm happy to try

Vote: Gazette.

[Atomic]

thxxxxxxxxx

Originally Posted by Gazette

You're abnormally wack, you're sort of a dwarf in proportion to Gaz ...
Cus Imma knock you out with *1 punch, 'Mick* like the Irish brawler in Snatch (1-punch Mickey yh?)
---no, too simple, plus don't explain ur punch---
Get to chalkin' his ass, got more genius bars than this bastard can fathom
It's a classic reaction, you'll be callin' me Einstein how I'm smashing an Atom
---to simple, plus the use of an ruined the chance of this workin' both ways the way u worded it---
Lacking the action, but you'll 'get the hang of it' when I put the rope to your throat
This league - a bitch league, aint goin' for gold, after this we'll be seeing *At' less* all 'over the globe'
---Not even sure what you said here, didnt sound like a diss to me tho---
No surprise a jokers a joke, even with women you aint got the shakers kid
You still aiming for bases bitch, n a little 'horseplay' don't count as a 'stable relationship'
---your connection works fine... horseplay/stable... however... theres not really much of a punch your wording is way off---
Refraining to rate the prick, he's just a vague number like abstractions of Pi ...
Cus if you think Atom's bombing me ... that's one 'mushroom' i'm happy to try
---too simple/obvious---

pce, g'luck

Originally Posted by Atomic

bitch i'm godly i floss, it's clear you're hardly a boss.
he'd have to write for a newspaper for gazette to take a girls clothing articles off.
---This was dope, best punch I've seen from you, wording was a bit off but still---
he has lesbian tendencies, yup this sickos a dyke,
last time this fgt had a cool flip was with his pillow @ night.
---played---
god has entered the building, bitch. it's time to honor,
if this retard got CrayOn a verse, i'll make sure to write mine in marker.
---connection works fine, hardly much of a punch tho---
just kill yourself quick or i'll murder you slut,
retard ur clearly low tear - now please try some vertical cuts.
---tier/tear is wayyyyyyyyyyyyy played holmes---
guns cocked don't run off, i'll blast this fag,
cuz u'll get Bar`d for ripping ME off, like a mattress tag.
---nah---

Both were weak...

Keys tho, so no complaints. Gazette's wording sucks, Atom had just old concepts in this verse.

His first bar took it for him

V/ Atomic.

This is ridiculous.

Gazette is docked 2 votes for free posts/swaying.

Good job, dip shit.

[Atomic]

put open for votes on this shit, even tho it won't matter roflz.

up

[Inno]

this was tough one...I honestly think both of you came pretty
even as far as effort and content...but I guess ama go with gazette
even though that verse is from 01...he had a bit more consistency
for me...gazette

[Sharp]

Originally Posted by Atomic

bitch i'm godly i floss, it's clear you're hardly a boss.
he'd have to write for a newspaper for gazette to take a girls clothing articles off.
See what you're going for but execution is off
he has lesbian tendencies, yup this sickos a dyke,
last time this fgt had a cool flip was with his pillow @ night.
Cool. Coulda been set up a lot better tho
god has entered the building, bitch. it's time to honor,
if this retard got CrayOn a verse, i'll make sure to write mine in marker.
Meeeeeeh
just kill yourself quick or i'll murder you slut,
retard ur clearly low tear - now please try some vertical cuts.
Tear/tier is played to hell and back
guns cocked don't run off, i'll blast this fag,
cuz u'll get Bar`d for ripping ME off, like a mattress tag.

Really corny

Originally Posted by Gazette

You're abnormally wack, you're sort of a dwarf in proportion to Gaz ...
Cus Imma knock you out with *1 punch, 'Mick* like the Irish brawler in Snatch (1-punch Mickey yh?)
Expos are corny as hell, ok idea but eh wording
Get to chalkin' his ass, got more genius bars than this bastard can fathom
It's a classic reaction, you'll be callin' me Einstein how I'm smashing an Atom
Pretty good, einstein split the atom tho. Little things can take away from bars like that
Lacking the action, but you'll 'get the hang of it' when I put the rope to your throat
This league - a bitch league, aint goin' for gold, after this we'll be seeing *At' less* all 'over the globe'
Punch was setup terribly, kinda longbarish excecution but alright idea
No surprise a jokers a joke, even with women you aint got the shakers kid
You still aiming for bases bitch, n a little 'horseplay' don't count as a 'stable relationship'
Really corny
Refraining to rate the prick, he's just a vague number like abstractions of Pi ...
Cus if you think Atom's bombing me ... that's one 'mushroom' i'm happy to try
Not too well done. I think you got ahead of yourself with complexity here
pce, g'luck

well, both were corny and rushed. I had gazette in quotes 2-1 tho, think he got it even with the worst misses since atomic didn't really have anythinh

V/gazette

[Greed]

Cool flip and crayon vs atless

All of gaz setups were really forced. Good concepts, but I'm not giving wins for how good a line could have been.

V/ at

[Boredom]

Get to chalkin' his ass, got more genius bars than this bastard can fathom
It's a classic reaction, you'll be callin' me Einstein how I'm smashing an Atom
No surprise a jokers a joke, even with women you aint got the shakers kid
You still aiming for bases bitch, n a little 'horseplay' don't count as a 'stable relationship'

vs

nothing

mvgt gazette

had some solid ideas and could be a thread if worked on his set ups and wording.. concepts were all decently fresh.. multi link ups were on point. at was pretty basic w/ nothing i was feeling tbh.

[Atomic]

2-2, vote homo's :)

[Cakedout]

god has entered the building, bitch. it's time to honor,
if this retard got CrayOn a verse, i'll make sure to write mine in marker.

Vs

Get to chalkin' his ass, got more genius bars than this bastard can fathom
It's a classic reaction, you'll be callin' me Einstein how I'm smashing an Atom
Lacking the action, but you'll 'get the hang of it' when I put the rope to your throat
This league - a bitch league, aint goin' for gold, after this we'll be seeing *At' less* all 'over the globe'
No surprise a jokers a joke, even with women you aint got the shakers kid
You still aiming for bases bitch, n a little 'horseplay' don't count as a 'stable relationship'

Mvgtgazette for having the cleaner consistent verse

[Coup]

Atom-

bitch i'm godly i floss, it's clear you're hardly a boss.
he'd have to write for a newspaper for gazette to take a girls clothing articles off.

an abstract punch and it works on a literary level, not sure how it makes sense to the senses tho...lol creative tho.

he has lesbian tendencies, yup this sickos a dyke,
last time this fgt had a cool flip was with his pillow @ night.

lol'd nice concept

god has entered the building, bitch. it's time to honor,
if this retard got CrayOn a verse, i'll make sure to write mine in marker.

Okay tho...good concept,

just kill yourself quick or i'll murder you slut,
retard ur clearly low tear - now please try some vertical cuts.

hmmm

guns cocked don't run off, i'll blast this fag,
cuz u'll get Bar`d for ripping ME off, like a mattress tag.

nice enough

Gazette

You're abnormally wack, you're sort of a dwarf in proportion to Gaz ...
Cus Imma knock you out with *1 punch, 'Mick* like the Irish brawler in Snatch (1-punch Mickey yh?)

hmmm I see what you did

Get to chalkin' his ass, got more genius bars than this bastard can fathom
It's a classic reaction, you'll be callin' me Einstein how I'm smashing an Atom

this works name play etc..

Lacking the action, but you'll 'get the hang of it' when I put the rope to your throat
This league - a bitch league, aint goin' for gold, after this we'll be seeing *At' less* all 'over the globe'

funny...something off tho but it works

No surprise a jokers a joke, even with women you aint got the shakers kid
You still aiming for bases bitch, n a little 'horseplay' don't count as a 'stable relationship'
Refraining to rate the prick, he's just a vague number like abstractions of Pi ...
Cus if you think Atom's bombing me ... that's one 'mushroom' i'm happy to try

best lines good stuff


v/ Gazette

just a bit cleaner and edged it in execution....

g'luck

[Spoken]

Atlas punch, atom

Vs

Article

I got gaz taking it with slightly better punches... Atomic was good but the finisher was lackluster on every bar while gaz was terrible in set up but made a nice effort in connection . MVGT: Gaz for a slightly better bar for bar

[Atomic]

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