Originally Posted by Gazette (Post 84945)

You're abnormally wack, you're sort of a dwarf in proportion to Gaz ...
Cus Imma knock you out with *1 punch, 'Mick* like the Irish brawler in Snatch (1-punch Mickey yh?)
---no, too simple, plus don't explain ur punch---
Get to chalkin' his ass, got more genius bars than this bastard can fathom
It's a classic reaction, you'll be callin' me Einstein how I'm smashing an Atom
---to simple, plus the use of an ruined the chance of this workin' both ways the way u worded it---
Lacking the action, but you'll 'get the hang of it' when I put the rope to your throat
This league - a bitch league, aint goin' for gold, after this we'll be seeing *At' less* all 'over the globe'
---Not even sure what you said here, didnt sound like a diss to me tho---
No surprise a jokers a joke, even with women you aint got the shakers kid
You still aiming for bases bitch, n a little 'horseplay' don't count as a 'stable relationship'
---your connection works fine... horseplay/stable... however... theres not really much of a punch your wording is way off---
Refraining to rate the prick, he's just a vague number like abstractions of Pi ...
Cus if you think Atom's bombing me ... that's one 'mushroom' i'm happy to try
---too simple/obvious---

pce, g'luck

Originally Posted by Atomic (Post 84905)

bitch i'm godly i floss, it's clear you're hardly a boss.
he'd have to write for a newspaper for gazette to take a girls clothing articles off.
---This was dope, best punch I've seen from you, wording was a bit off but still---
he has lesbian tendencies, yup this sickos a dyke,
last time this fgt had a cool flip was with his pillow @ night.
---played---
god has entered the building, bitch. it's time to honor,
if this retard got CrayOn a verse, i'll make sure to write mine in marker.
---connection works fine, hardly much of a punch tho---
just kill yourself quick or i'll murder you slut,
retard ur clearly low tear - now please try some vertical cuts.
---tier/tear is wayyyyyyyyyyyyy played holmes---
guns cocked don't run off, i'll blast this fag,
cuz u'll get Bar`d for ripping ME off, like a mattress tag.
---nah---

Originally Posted by Atomic (Post 84905)

bitch i'm godly i floss, it's clear you're hardly a boss.
he'd have to write for a newspaper for gazette to take a girls clothing articles off.
See what you're going for but execution is off
he has lesbian tendencies, yup this sickos a dyke,
last time this fgt had a cool flip was with his pillow @ night.
Cool. Coulda been set up a lot better tho
god has entered the building, bitch. it's time to honor,
if this retard got CrayOn a verse, i'll make sure to write mine in marker.
Meeeeeeh
just kill yourself quick or i'll murder you slut,
retard ur clearly low tear - now please try some vertical cuts.
Tear/tier is played to hell and back
guns cocked don't run off, i'll blast this fag,
cuz u'll get Bar`d for ripping ME off, like a mattress tag.

Originally Posted by Gazette (Post 84945)

You're abnormally wack, you're sort of a dwarf in proportion to Gaz ...
Cus Imma knock you out with *1 punch, 'Mick* like the Irish brawler in Snatch (1-punch Mickey yh?)
Expos are corny as hell, ok idea but eh wording
Get to chalkin' his ass, got more genius bars than this bastard can fathom
It's a classic reaction, you'll be callin' me Einstein how I'm smashing an Atom
Pretty good, einstein split the atom tho. Little things can take away from bars like that
Lacking the action, but you'll 'get the hang of it' when I put the rope to your throat
This league - a bitch league, aint goin' for gold, after this we'll be seeing *At' less* all 'over the globe'
Punch was setup terribly, kinda longbarish excecution but alright idea
No surprise a jokers a joke, even with women you aint got the shakers kid
You still aiming for bases bitch, n a little 'horseplay' don't count as a 'stable relationship'
Really corny
Refraining to rate the prick, he's just a vague number like abstractions of Pi ...
Cus if you think Atom's bombing me ... that's one 'mushroom' i'm happy to try
Not too well done. I think you got ahead of yourself with complexity here
pce, g'luck