Silver vs RD Mcfly - [RD McFly WINS]

Dope girl · 06-11-2014, 04:53 PM

10 lines

due: by tonight

Dope girl · 06-16-2014, 11:23 AM

your rhymes are so whack & that's a fact
so why you don't you run along have a big mac for snack
I'm guaranteed to succeed, I'll make ya bleed
you look like lighter fluid I be the fire!
so I'm burning you up so call me desire
I be suppressing, killing you with my lyrics & make you depressing
you shaking with you fear
make you shed a thousand tears.
you weak to the heart
go practice your speech before rip through your thoughts.

I tried...
stop playing games.

RD McFly · 06-16-2014, 12:58 PM

Apologies for being tardy, I beg your pardon; I'm retarded..
..or just lazy; you're just crazy..
Lady..you been nuts about scoring with balls far before the world cup started..
I'm not going to assume you're fat or that you're likely reading this famished..
but I am so it suits you to know I like the miracle whip heavy on my sammich..
you on the ledge maintaining hope still? I prefer a balcony with silicone and beads..
my schemes are silly with no beat...still...that last line sealed the window, sil..
hit her with both of these 'bows till she drops to her knees and she blows..
cause oral sex until lockjaw would be a better idea then wasting a key on this hoe..
this bitch is a joke, but not funny so if anyone lulz it'll be suprisin'..
picturin' silver's hills is not what I had in mind when my therapist said broad in my horizon..

El Muffin · 06-16-2014, 04:57 PM

Uhhhhh

V/ not humanity

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Megacito · 06-25-2014, 06:32 PM

Silvers bars were weak compared to RD Mcfly. Favorite lines from RD

Quote:

Originally Posted by RD McFly

my schemes are silly with no beat...still...that last line sealed the window, sil..
hit her with both of these 'bows till she drops to her knees and she blows..
cause oral sex until lockjaw would be a better idea then wasting a key on this hoe..
this bitch is a joke, but not funny so if anyone lulz it'll be suprisin'..
picturin' silver's hills is not what I had in mind when my therapist said broad in my horizon..

Vote/RD Mcfly

ROUKE · 06-26-2014, 01:28 PM

this is terrible... is any1 good on this site

V/ mcfly

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Paradigm · 07-02-2014, 01:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Silver

your rhymes are so whack & that's a fact
so why you don't you run along have a big mac for snack
I'm guaranteed to succeed, I'll make ya bleed
you look like lighter fluid I be the fire!
so I'm burning you up so call me desire
I be suppressing, killing you with my lyrics & make you depressing
you shaking with you fear
make you shed a thousand tears.
you weak to the heart
go practice your speech before rip through your thoughts.

You have no Punchlines, Personals, Wordplay or Rhyme Schemes. You have weak Metaphors and thats it. I know you must be a troll but please if you happen to not be one, read around battles and imitate and conceptualize bars like the top tier people around netcees do

Quote:

Originally Posted by RD McFly

Apologies for being tardy, I beg your pardon; I'm retarded..
..or just lazy; you're just crazy..
Lady..you been nuts about scoring with balls far before the world cup started..
sigh.
I'm not going to assume you're fat or that you're likely reading this famished..
but I am so it suits you to know I like the miracle whip heavy on my sammich..
...
you on the ledge maintaining hope still? I prefer a balcony with silicone and beads..
my schemes are silly with no beat...still...that last line sealed the window, sil..
window sil is cool too bad no connection
hit her with both of these 'bows till she drops to her knees and she blows..
cause oral sex until lockjaw would be a better idea then wasting a key on this hoe..
Played, I used a lockjaw/key to victory like 8yrs ago sorry lol
this bitch is a joke, but not funny so if anyone lulz it'll be suprisin'..
picturin' silver's hills is not what I had in mind when my therapist said broad in my horizon.
lol gross

RD only had the creative stuff in this. You should not let the level of your competition completely dictate the level in which you drop, just saying.

Paradigm · 07-02-2014, 01:33 AM

@Muff Diggity @ROUKE

Votes don't count unless they edit with explanation

2-0 RD Mcfly

I need Voting Links from @RD McFly @Silver or You will lose pts when battle is closed

Certain · 07-02-2014, 01:36 AM

RD McFly's punchlines were about how much dick Silver gets. Imagine writing a verse about how much pussy your male opponent gets? He also called her curvy. His entire verse was a compliment to her. At least Silver insulted her opponent.

Vote: Silver

Dope girl · 07-07-2014, 03:16 PM

www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=77694

www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=80574

Paradigm · 07-28-2014, 12:08 AM

2-1 RD McFly

KnowP · 07-30-2014, 01:52 PM

no punches

vs

Apologies for being tardy, I beg your pardon; I'm retarded..
..or just lazy; you're just crazy..
Lady..you been nuts about scoring with balls far before the world cup started..

RD almost had the closer but set up made it weak. the opener was a tad stretched but still the LOTB. Silver you gotta think more creatively and not just through statements out. Read some punchlines in the l1-2 league and figure out how to throw an actual creative punchline.

v. mcfly

Adverse · 07-31-2014, 12:54 AM

This was a very weak battle honestly but I gotta give it to Mcfly, just because Silvers verse sounds like something I would have wrote back in 6th grade, this doesn't seem like a battle at all to me, all the punches were indirect, no personals or nothing hard hitting at all. Mcfly had the closer which was pretty weak and the window sil one, world cup was generic as fuck but that too vs. Nothing from Silver so I'm going with RD

Vote: RD Mcfly

ribbit · 07-31-2014, 09:57 AM

Aye i felt the same way silver didnt come with anything at least rd attempted to throw a punch didnt like anything in silvers verse tuckin rd had flow multis and a few halfway decent bars but it was enuff to take win

Paradigm · 07-31-2014, 04:07 PM

RD McFly Wins 5-1

06-11-2014, 04:53 PM	#1
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,707 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	Silver vs RD Mcfly - [RD McFly WINS] 10 lines due: by tonight

06-16-2014, 11:23 AM	#2
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,707 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	mmmmm your rhymes are so whack & that's a fact so why you don't you run along have a big mac for snack I'm guaranteed to succeed, I'll make ya bleed you look like lighter fluid I be the fire! so I'm burning you up so call me desire I be suppressing, killing you with my lyrics & make you depressing you shaking with you fear make you shed a thousand tears. you weak to the heart go practice your speech before rip through your thoughts. I tried... stop playing games. Last edited by Dope girl; 06-16-2014 at 02:10 PM.

06-16-2014, 12:58 PM	#3
RD McFly Plane Mode Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 119 Battle Record: 1-0 Rep Power: 0	Apologies for being tardy, I beg your pardon; I'm retarded.. ..or just lazy; you're just crazy.. Lady..you been nuts about scoring with balls far before the world cup started.. I'm not going to assume you're fat or that you're likely reading this famished.. but I am so it suits you to know I like the miracle whip heavy on my sammich.. you on the ledge maintaining hope still? I prefer a balcony with silicone and beads.. my schemes are silly with no beat...still...that last line sealed the window, sil.. hit her with both of these 'bows till she drops to her knees and she blows.. cause oral sex until lockjaw would be a better idea then wasting a key on this hoe.. this bitch is a joke, but not funny so if anyone lulz it'll be suprisin'.. picturin' silver's hills is not what I had in mind when my therapist said broad in my horizon.. __________________ "There's a bunch of n**s breathin' right now that's dead to me.." -Budden

06-16-2014, 04:57 PM	#4
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,693 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230532	Uhhhhh V/ not humanity Vote doesn't count, not explained - Paradigm __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

06-26-2014, 01:28 PM	#6
ROUKE Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 25 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 0	this is terrible... is any1 good on this site V/ mcfly Vote doesn't count, not explained - Paradigm Last edited by ROUKE; 06-30-2014 at 10:15 PM.

07-02-2014, 01:33 AM	#8
Paradigm ___________ Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: California Posts: 1,989 Battle Record: 4-4 Champed - The Ultimate Textcee - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11033509	@Muff Diggity @ROUKE Votes don't count unless they edit with explanation 2-0 RD Mcfly I need Voting Links from @RD McFly @Silver or You will lose pts when battle is closed

07-02-2014, 01:36 AM	#9
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899403	RD McFly's punchlines were about how much dick Silver gets. Imagine writing a verse about how much pussy your male opponent gets? He also called her curvy. His entire verse was a compliment to her. At least Silver insulted her opponent. Vote: Silver __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

07-07-2014, 03:16 PM	#10
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,707 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=77694 www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=80574

07-28-2014, 12:08 AM	#11
Paradigm ___________ Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: California Posts: 1,989 Battle Record: 4-4 Champed - The Ultimate Textcee - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11033509	2-1 RD McFly

07-30-2014, 01:52 PM	#12
KnowP Nasty Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 221 Battle Record: 6-3 Champed - BA Cypher Rep Power: 3463485	no punches vs Apologies for being tardy, I beg your pardon; I'm retarded.. ..or just lazy; you're just crazy.. Lady..you been nuts about scoring with balls far before the world cup started.. RD almost had the closer but set up made it weak. the opener was a tad stretched but still the LOTB. Silver you gotta think more creatively and not just through statements out. Read some punchlines in the l1-2 league and figure out how to throw an actual creative punchline. v. mcfly

07-31-2014, 12:54 AM	#13
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,744 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446143	This was a very weak battle honestly but I gotta give it to Mcfly, just because Silvers verse sounds like something I would have wrote back in 6th grade, this doesn't seem like a battle at all to me, all the punches were indirect, no personals or nothing hard hitting at all. Mcfly had the closer which was pretty weak and the window sil one, world cup was generic as fuck but that too vs. Nothing from Silver so I'm going with RD Vote: RD Mcfly

07-31-2014, 09:57 AM	#14
ribbit The deputy of nc Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: The Rodent Kingdom Posts: 514 Battle Record: 1-10 Rep Power: 7784050	Aye i felt the same way silver didnt come with anything at least rd attempted to throw a punch didnt like anything in silvers verse tuckin rd had flow multis and a few halfway decent bars but it was enuff to take win __________________ Get lost

07-31-2014, 04:07 PM	#15
Paradigm ___________ Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: California Posts: 1,989 Battle Record: 4-4 Champed - The Ultimate Textcee - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11033509	RD McFly Wins 5-1