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Silver vs RD Mcfly - [RD McFly WINS]

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due: by tonight

Apologies for being tardy, I beg your pardon; I'm retarded..
..or just lazy; you're just crazy..
Lady..you been nuts about scoring with balls far before the world cup started..
I'm not going to assume you're fat or that you're likely reading this famished..
but I am so it suits you to know I like the miracle whip heavy on my sammich..
you on the ledge maintaining hope still? I prefer a balcony with silicone and beads..
my schemes are silly with no beat...still...that last line sealed the window, sil..
hit her with both of these 'bows till she drops to her knees and she blows..
cause oral sex until lockjaw would be a better idea then wasting a key on this hoe..
this bitch is a joke, but not funny so if anyone lulz it'll be suprisin'..
picturin' silver's hills is not what I had in mind when my therapist said broad in my horizon..

Uhhhhh

V/ not humanity

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Silvers bars were weak compared to RD Mcfly. Favorite lines from RD

Quote:

Originally Posted by RD McFly (Post 350817)

my schemes are silly with no beat...still...that last line sealed the window, sil..
hit her with both of these 'bows till she drops to her knees and she blows..
cause oral sex until lockjaw would be a better idea then wasting a key on this hoe..
this bitch is a joke, but not funny so if anyone lulz it'll be suprisin'..
picturin' silver's hills is not what I had in mind when my therapist said broad in my horizon..

Vote/RD Mcfly

this is terrible... is any1 good on this site

V/ mcfly

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Silver (Post 350774)

your rhymes are so whack & that's a fact
so why you don't you run along have a big mac for snack
I'm guaranteed to succeed, I'll make ya bleed
you look like lighter fluid I be the fire!
so I'm burning you up so call me desire
I be suppressing, killing you with my lyrics & make you depressing
you shaking with you fear
make you shed a thousand tears.
you weak to the heart
go practice your speech before rip through your thoughts.

You have no Punchlines, Personals, Wordplay or Rhyme Schemes. You have weak Metaphors and thats it. I know you must be a troll but please if you happen to not be one, read around battles and imitate and conceptualize bars like the top tier people around netcees do

Quote:

Originally Posted by RD McFly (Post 350817)

Apologies for being tardy, I beg your pardon; I'm retarded..
..or just lazy; you're just crazy..
Lady..you been nuts about scoring with balls far before the world cup started..
sigh.
I'm not going to assume you're fat or that you're likely reading this famished..
but I am so it suits you to know I like the miracle whip heavy on my sammich..
...
you on the ledge maintaining hope still? I prefer a balcony with silicone and beads..
my schemes are silly with no beat...still...that last line sealed the window, sil..
window sil is cool too bad no connection
hit her with both of these 'bows till she drops to her knees and she blows..
cause oral sex until lockjaw would be a better idea then wasting a key on this hoe..
Played, I used a lockjaw/key to victory like 8yrs ago sorry lol
this bitch is a joke, but not funny so if anyone lulz it'll be suprisin'..
picturin' silver's hills is not what I had in mind when my therapist said broad in my horizon.
lol gross

RD only had the creative stuff in this. You should not let the level of your competition completely dictate the level in which you drop, just saying.

@Muff Diggity @ROUKE

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2-0 RD Mcfly

I need Voting Links from @RD McFly @Silver or You will lose pts when battle is closed

RD McFly's punchlines were about how much dick Silver gets. Imagine writing a verse about how much pussy your male opponent gets? He also called her curvy. His entire verse was a compliment to her. At least Silver insulted her opponent.

Vote: Silver

no punches

vs

Apologies for being tardy, I beg your pardon; I'm retarded..
..or just lazy; you're just crazy..
Lady..you been nuts about scoring with balls far before the world cup started..

RD almost had the closer but set up made it weak. the opener was a tad stretched but still the LOTB. Silver you gotta think more creatively and not just through statements out. Read some punchlines in the l1-2 league and figure out how to throw an actual creative punchline.

v. mcfly

This was a very weak battle honestly but I gotta give it to Mcfly, just because Silvers verse sounds like something I would have wrote back in 6th grade, this doesn't seem like a battle at all to me, all the punches were indirect, no personals or nothing hard hitting at all. Mcfly had the closer which was pretty weak and the window sil one, world cup was generic as fuck but that too vs. Nothing from Silver so I'm going with RD

Vote: RD Mcfly

Aye i felt the same way silver didnt come with anything at least rd attempted to throw a punch didnt like anything in silvers verse tuckin rd had flow multis and a few halfway decent bars but it was enuff to take win