Texcellence vs Orc - ORC WINS

[Texcellence]

10-16 Lines
Due: As soon as.

[Orc]

might drop ina hr. 16 if i do

[Orc]

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his chick sooo fat that her pregnant moms walked w/ her stomach
ya girl wasn't a wide berth. more like an outcast & a 'never talked to in public'
maaan ur top 2 wackest styles that ive witnessed
.. im saying texaco owner at least & we ain't talking no oil rich lists
wen this mahfucka meets a girl trust softness nears
dudes penis ain't limp, it's got two crutches n' hasn't walked in years
allllll my girls can be rode for hrs wen supplying to needs
bet your girl can get rode too. into battle.. as a most reliable steed
.. you losing ya way along time ago is total fact
&&talking like he aint astray is reaaal ironic wen nobody knows this cat
w/ that steez ur rocking trust u'll land in the dirt
cuz ya concepts are missing kid. shits bouta set off an amber alert
u'll catcha blast to the face, O's the last of the greats
this shit was so natural i'm waiting for Bags to say ''congrats on the rape''

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[Texcellence]

Apologies for the delay, crazy weekend.
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I mean AOL? Jeez Hades if it isn’t true that you are stuck in the past
Then let Zeus take AIM and strike me down til’ I’m nothing but char
I can only imagine the fails you make when your chatting to bitches
Like, “Hey, how you doing? Take my number, I’ll page you my digits”
Who am I kiddin? Bitches… I hope this faggot is floored for his sins
I’m not judging, I just find it weird how….
…..This Orc brings irony and a new meaning to the lord of the rings
That’s an impressive record of wins…... taken mostly from no shows
Orc the type to be stood up but tell his bros “pretty face, ass… so so”
I’ve been busy, takin’ my girl out for food & drinks, treating her right
Whilst Orc has been sending his smileys and winks…
......... Googling time differences to be sure he let's her sleep at night

Our priorities aren’t the same and our lives are clearly very different
Your parents encourage you to lives yours….
But your attitude is always “TEXT IS MY LIFE, DO YOU EVER LISTEN?!"
I’ve fallen off, but for the above, I’m content with my performance
I’m trying to figure what’s going to kill you first, old age or boredom

[Sharp]

@Orc @texcellence 2 voting links each please

[Texcellence]

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=35524
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=35021
@Sharp Nine - Clean this thread up please.

[KwaL!ty]

.. you losing ya way along time ago is total fact
&&talking like he aint astray is reaaal ironic wen nobody knows this cat
w/ that steez ur rocking trust u'll land in the dirt
cuz ya concepts are missing kid. shits bouta set off an amber alert


----I understand this was probably a key style, but Orc this was un-direct all over the place .. im growing tired of the girl punches just seems lame in battle not knowing the person ... Some of your bars had dope concepts but the wording made no impact toward your opponent even though i liked the Stray Cat line & the Amber Alert had me rolling ...

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Our priorities aren’t the same and our lives are clearly very different
Your parents encourage you to lives yours….
But your attitude is always “TEXT IS MY LIFE, DO YOU EVER LISTEN?!"


-----Tex i feel like your kind of stuck in the past on bars, i know its just rust & your just getting back into this .. But work on the flow some of the bars didnt connect .. Aim punches? this aint 02' .. the punches & direction need work .. there is definitely room for improvement ..



Vote- Orc-A-Straight ..

[Texcellence]

Originally Posted by Phuck Yew

Aim punches? this aint 02'

That was the point.

Thanks for the vote.

[Allen Knight]

Limp, concepts, closer

Vs

Google time difference

V/orc.......text u need to work on concepts an wording alot of ur bars were bland
U have the idea but need to make them creative..orc had a solid verse couple cool bars
He wins imo...props on the battle yahll

[Tic]

wen this mahfucka meets a girl trust softness nears
dudes penis ain't limp, it's got two crutches n' hasn't walked in years
allllll my girls can be rode for hrs wen supplying to needs
bet your girl can get rode too. into battle.. as a most reliable steed
w/ that steez ur rocking trust u'll land in the dirt
cuz ya concepts are missing kid. shits bouta set off an amber alert

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Whilst Orc has been sending his smileys and winks…
......... Googling time differences to be sure he let's her sleep at night
Our priorities aren’t the same and our lives are clearly very different


V/Orc - Those limp & Amber alert lines were enough to seal the deal. Tex had 1 notable, otherwise not really much.

[Bender]

wen this mahfucka meets a girl trust softness nears
dudes penis ain't limp, it's got two crutches n' hasn't walked in years

w/ that steez ur rocking trust u'll land in the dirt
cuz ya concepts are missing kid. shits bouta set off an amber alert

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I’ve been busy, takin’ my girl out for food & drinks, treating her right
Whilst Orc has been sending his smileys and winks…
......... Googling time differences to be sure he let's her sleep at night

Tex had some ok punches but I think Orc had a better verse. Some of the concepts could have been set up better on both ends but I actually laughed at the limp line.

Vote-Orc

[Ryan 12]

his chick sooo fat that her pregnant moms walked w/ her stomach
ya girl wasn't a wide berth. more like an outcast & a 'never talked to in public'
.. you losing ya way along time ago is total fact
&&talking like he aint astray is reaaal ironic wen nobody knows this cat

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I’ve been busy, takin’ my girl out for food & drinks, treating her right
Whilst Orc has been sending his smileys and winks…
......... Googling time differences to be sure he let's her sleep at night




ok battle. can tell orc is rusty as fuck, but he had enough to win this easy. tex u got some good concepts just have to work on ur wording and tweak a few things here and there.

v - orc

[Sharp]

@Orc need 2 links from you. If you don't get em in eventually this becomes a no show win for the other guy

Closing so no one else votes, please put the links in the chat thread