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Join Date: Aug 2013
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.. you losing ya way along time ago is total fact
&&talking like he aint astray is reaaal ironic wen nobody knows this cat w/ that steez ur rocking trust u'll land in the dirt cuz ya concepts are missing kid. shits bouta set off an amber alert ----I understand this was probably a key style, but Orc this was un-direct all over the place .. im growing tired of the girl punches just seems lame in battle not knowing the person ... Some of your bars had dope concepts but the wording made no impact toward your opponent even though i liked the Stray Cat line & the Amber Alert had me rolling ... vs Our priorities aren’t the same and our lives are clearly very different Your parents encourage you to lives yours…. But your attitude is always “TEXT IS MY LIFE, DO YOU EVER LISTEN?!" -----Tex i feel like your kind of stuck in the past on bars, i know its just rust & your just getting back into this .. But work on the flow some of the bars didnt connect .. Aim punches? this aint 02' .. the punches & direction need work .. there is definitely room for improvement .. Vote- Orc-A-Straight .. |
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Join Date: Dec 2013
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