serge t vs. jilti - OPEN FOR VOTES

[jilti]

12-16 lines due next friday 9/18/15
match first to drop
@serge T

[serge T]

Originally Posted by jilti

12-16 lines due next friday 9/18/15
match first to drop
@serge T

Remind me on Friday or mention me when you drop. I'm saying, if you want to drop in an hour we can do that too. I'll just end up putting this off until due date anyway lol

[jilti]

Originally Posted by serge T

Remind me on Friday or mention me when you drop. I'm saying, if you want to drop in an hour we can do that too. I'll just end up putting this off until due date anyway lol

I'll remind u

[jilti]

Originally Posted by serge T

I live in Harlem. A regular cut like a Caesar or Fade is 15. I give him 20 and don't ask for my change.

$5 tip is pretty good. Some times I'll hit him with an extra 10. Getting the right cut isn't really easy imo. Even a good barber might not be the right one for you. Tip your barber well.

catch a quick fade at the barber shop in about a second
gonna feel steel buzzin by your ears like i was trimming around the edges
but f' it.. since u already there i'll clean up ur jawline w/ a .45 falcon
gun residue leave Powder on ur face before barbers can apply the talcum
and who cares if ur gay ass gives out 10 or a courtesy 5
cuz while u Hand Over Tips, we're just hoping u stop jerking off guys
rah rah type. but soon as dude makes a move,he'll be left a quadriplegic
so next time that nigga Serge Forward, it's tryna sit up in a wheelchair while doctors feed him
his girl got diseases, but he still Injector raw dog & screws the bitch
now when STP, it burns inside from not using proper lubricants
truth is i got mad clips, mag spit til ur abs rip & joints lost
let ratchets clap in ur face like bitches tryna get they point across
wan go rounds in a cage & test an animal? thats a lab rat course bro
u'll feel like a sacrificial Lamborghini pig once those suicide doors close
in l.a. we sittin on dubs while n.y. homos take the Subway to get around
over here Kids Ride On Spokes,Man. y'all only do that when Jared Fogle in town


16 @serge T

[serge T]

Act cocky; you don't wanna war though
For gettin souped up, I'll draw cans like Andy Warhol
I don't compliment dudes, I'm stompin on noobs
Rippin' dude like a missile through a thistle tube
My shit is rude
Old generation, used to doing shit my way
This is Sega vs Xbox, and I only only come at you sideways
Back track or get backslapped by the sickest of past fights
On the grind I split lips like tricks on a half pipe
Live life to stack chips; I'm in league with legends
You live life for chips and League of Legends
The type that rolls over after sex and cries..
...gets insecure; sucks his stomach in while in a group of guys
Truth or lies?
This is do or die, and you regrettin' this mission, kid
More palpable instances of how sad his existence is
I dump lead often, Dow chemical with the 2-shot
Known to drop shells, nigga, I'm Shredder on the roof top

@jilti

[sral]

Jilti got this one, better wording and execution throughout so that just about every line connected even if some hit less then others.

Serge almost had me with the Warhol line but I just feel like that shit can be done, and better. Rest was nothing special.

Jilti wins.

[Resin M-I-C]

clap from jilti n warhol by serge were HEATERS

[serge T]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Re72di5phM0

[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by jilti

Gun powder/talcum, Serge forward, lubricants & Jared

..those were pretty good, the rest I've either seen before or fell flat, imo.

Originally Posted by serge T

Andy Warhol, Half Pipe, Shredder

Good verse, but for the most part it was quick witted w/ too little impact.

Decent showings from both, but JILTI was more effective.

[Strikta]

Jilti def got this imo.

Can't drop a reg vote, I'm on the phone away from the crib... but I had to see what Serge was up to. He's still got the skills to be a threat if he wanted.. just happened to lose this battle, in what I assume to be his 1st in quite some time. Rust was a factor here surely... tho I'm not taking anything away from Jilt cuz he dropped nice.

Props to yall niggas. Good shit.

[Sovereign]

SOVEREIGN'S VOTE ON BATTLE: jilti vs. Serge T

jilti: My feeling on this verse was that you had strong concepts, but your delivery was subpar. Your punchlines were clever enough to make me think, but not incomprehensible. That border is difficult to tread while maintaining humor, but you did so in a superb fashion. (The STP bar in particular was the funniest one I've seen in a long time.)

What I disliked about this verse was the execution, especially the scheming. I caught an apparently broken multi in there at one or two points; such errors kill even the most well-thought-out punchlines. Your flow could also use some work. If you can perfect your rhyming, mixing internals in with lengthy, sustained, non-broken schemes, you could be a serious contender. Final Score: 14/20

Serge T: I liked your rhyming in this verse, and you had a few decent punchlines. However, in terms of humor, conceptual complexity, and overall impact, your bars were much weaker than your opponent's. You also had shorter lines, and consequently, less material.

Your drop wasn't awful, but it was lacking in every area; severely so in some. I see potential in you, but you need to put in serious work. Final Score: 9/20

Final Thoughts: There's not that much for me to say on this one. Both had their high-points and their flaws, but one was more deficient. Good battle to both, and keep elevating.

jilti gets my vote over Serge T (14 - 9)

[serge T]

Originally Posted by Strikta

Jilti def got this imo.

Can't drop a reg vote, I'm on the phone away from the crib... but I had to see what Serge was up to. He's still got the skills to be a threat if he wanted.. just happened to lose this battle, in what I assume to be his 1st in quite some time. Rust was a factor here surely... tho I'm not taking anything away from Jilt cuz he dropped nice.

Props to yall niggas. Good shit.

I just wanted to shake some off. Sovereign sees potential in me though! lol.

[puravida]

Originally Posted by jilti

but f' it.. since u already there i'll clean up ur jawline w/ a .45 falcon
gun residue leave Powder on ur face before barbers can apply the talcum

rah rah type. but soon as dude makes a move,he'll be left a quadriplegic
so next time that nigga Serge Forward, it's tryna sit up in a wheelchair while doctors feed him
@serge T

Originally Posted by serge T

Act cocky; you don't wanna war though
For gettin souped up, I'll draw cans like Andy Warhol

I dump lead often, Dow chemical with the 2-shot
Known to drop shells, nigga, I'm Shredder on the roof top

@jilti

@serge T you def have potential, however. I feel like J got this with a more experienced, better worded versed. Both had good lines. I felt J had some fresher flips.

vote - J

[Strikta]

Originally Posted by serge T

I just wanted to shake some off. Sovereign sees potential in me though! lol.

Word man i hear ya. Lol

[ekelon luvs cock meat sandwiches]

Originally Posted by serge T

Live life to stack chips; I'm in league with legends
You live life for chips and League of Legends

Felt this applied well to these netcee nerds, dope

Originally Posted by serge T

The type that rolls over after sex and cries..
...gets insecure; sucks his stomach in while in a group of guys
Truth or lies?

Again, dope rhyme scheme, pretty much bodied NC with these bars


Voted for Serge T

Darkside.

[puravida]

Originally Posted by ekelon

Voted for Serge T

Darkside.

That won't work around here ^^^ break down your vote

[sral]

real deal already did a warhol line

i knew it would have been done

[Destroyer]

I did a Warhol line like 2 months ago

[JESODIST]

Don't know any of you but i Vote for serge

[Lotto Smirk]

Jilti wins