08-05-2015, 07:48 AM | #1 |
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Lotto Smirk vs Ruck {Lotto Smirk wins}
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08-06-2015, 07:55 AM | #2 |
that's not me.
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i’m actually surprised you answered my call out, so..
Ruck gives you a thumbs up like vault boy from fall out… now it’s been awhile - comin' from the hood to the text section first things shake some rust and break my foot off in the next rectum let’s go. rip with no rhymes or reason, my first battle feels like finals season turn you to a paraplegic after I use your weak bars to replace your spinal region your previous battle dim, Ruck is a bright spot - back to spit bars like a lisp suffer in a nightspot fire punches on regular, speaking of speech impediments people say everything Ruck white hot R takin’ no shots, my bars untouched.. on street fighter - i’ve got the perfect lines take this 'itsy bitsy' 'little tea pot' 'down the hill' and then let the strap read you nursery rhymes now Lotto know he’s facing rejection, usually don’t battle scrubs but i’ll make an exception you should be embracing this lesson, no bar set up - smirk has to be the gayest facial expression he decided to name himself that.. and then he checked “in this bitch” like a tampon Smirk stumped for some good bars and it’ll be even harder to write with his hands gone i don’t buy into Lotto, so it’s time to pillage the corner shops and set fire to news stands Ruck awoke as a beast and this faggot just wakes up with a sore back and bruised hands fuck.. i feel ill - not that ill, i’m sick because my first verse back was complete garbage it’s a shame that i don’t think i can really son you niggas like deceased fathers how to rate half of this sites texters.. is it cool to describe battlers as herbs again? so when Ruck take these text belts you faggots can quote the very first words i said. |
08-09-2015, 07:50 AM | #3 |
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Literally keyd this shit
u ain't a threat ur verse the wackest thing I've sin bro it looks like u wrote a story bored n that's what we we're by the intro named urself after rugby union, man that shit isn't sound cus u ruck? yeah ur known for receiving balls off a man on the ground u don't deal drugs cus we know w/ gangsta's u ain't dead tight wudnt have coke with ur name on it even if u got a personalised bottle of the website don't act like u beef, u ain't a man ur faking u cudnt grow a pair of tits even with the estrogen tablets ya taking don't offer me that shit weed or ya'll get blast w/ the shotty won't be need for rucksack I'll just throw u in the river to dispose of ya body |
08-10-2015, 07:14 AM | #4 |
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Can we please get some votes?
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08-10-2015, 07:25 AM | #5 |
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They will come. It can take up to a week so chill, don't "up" the thread. I will get you the votes in due process.
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08-14-2015, 10:53 AM | #6 |
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Ruck:
im thinkin u a long bar head. Gay Expression,speech lines were the only ones i felt. Lotto-Rucksack. opener .balls on ground was played as fuck. V-lotto |
08-14-2015, 04:24 PM | #7 |
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Smirk gay expression
vs Rugby/ruck, coke bottle Ruck u have good wording bro, ur ideas are way to simple though. Nursery rhymes n all that shit has been done before. Think of current events n try to incorporate them into punches. Or freher ideas. Lotto took this one Vote - Lotto |
08-16-2015, 12:32 PM | #8 |
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Lotto easily won this.
I hated the shit before/after Ruck's verse. It was completely pointless and unneeded, miss me with that shit in future. You didn't even really seem to go at your opponent or attack him creatively at all. I'm high as fuck tbh but this shit trash man hahahahhaa I cant even be polite about it. You garbage. Lotto keyed up some bullshit and had you at storyboard/coke with your name. Lotto wins.
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08-16-2015, 07:47 PM | #9 |
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3-0 Lotto Smirk wins by KO
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