first track recorded, check it out

Aspect · 06-27-2015, 03:45 AM

breezin, prod by my homie sunberg

going to start working on a 6-8 track project.

https://soundcloud.com/4lphabe7/bree...d-sunbergsound

El Muffin · 06-27-2015, 04:01 AM

Lol why u do that to that man beat thoooo

Lol jk but I can barely hear this n 8 got my volume on max

Why is that

Nm it was my phone

Chill Phil · 06-27-2015, 06:49 AM

The beat was too distracting from the tone and cadence you used.

Aside from that, whatever kind of subject matter you were going on about wasn't enthralling to me. You weren't talking about anything I could relate to, and it wasn't something that evoked any kind of emotional response. Just "I'm dope and ahead of my time," kind of shit with a dead pan delivery.

Keep spitting homie, you've got the basics.

Geno · 06-27-2015, 11:04 AM

Horror core.
Your vocals are way low man. Turnbthe beat level down a big or turn your vocal levels up. Either that or back off on the vocals compression until the beat isnt drownibg your voice out..

Maybe try a combination og those thibgs until you sound more clear. But as for what your sayi g.. nahh. I can dig that kind of shit once in a while. But its just annoying to me anymore. Mainly the reason i dont listen to necro anymore lol. Kinda sounded lime hat content wise imo.

The beat is nice.. and if you fix sou d levels it might actually sound more like your getting at the beat better. But as is this just sounds meh.
like phill said.. you got the basics. Try writing some subject matter that is relateable and draws people to want to listen. Tbh.. this just makes me and probably most people want to turn it off.

Keep recording man. Not entirely a waste!

Ghost1 · 06-27-2015, 11:06 AM

YEA GENO AN SEADAD THE ONLY ONES DROPPING MEDIOCRE HOMEMADE RAP MUSIC ON NETCEES FAGIT GET FAMILIAR!

Geno · 06-27-2015, 11:10 AM

You know you love my style bags

06-27-2015, 03:45 AM	#1
Aspect Third Eye Vision Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 6 Accomplishments - Is faggot alphabet Champed - 2015 Biter of the year - Bit 3 NC Hall of famers - Mid tier biter Rep Power: 0	first track recorded, check it out breezin, prod by my homie sunberg going to start working on a 6-8 track project. https://soundcloud.com/4lphabe7/bree...d-sunbergsound

06-27-2015, 04:01 AM	#2
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	Lol why u do that to that man beat thoooo Lol jk but I can barely hear this n 8 got my volume on max Why is that Nm it was my phone __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople Last edited by El Muffin; 06-27-2015 at 05:39 AM.

06-27-2015, 06:49 AM	#3
Chill Phil World's Heaviest Ghost Join Date: May 2015 Location: At home Posts: 2,585 Rep Power: 48431850	The beat was too distracting from the tone and cadence you used. Aside from that, whatever kind of subject matter you were going on about wasn't enthralling to me. You weren't talking about anything I could relate to, and it wasn't something that evoked any kind of emotional response. Just "I'm dope and ahead of my time," kind of shit with a dead pan delivery. Keep spitting homie, you've got the basics. __________________ Drunk in the club, let a nigga say somethin'... I'll have him fall victim like the nigga base jumpin',

06-27-2015, 11:04 AM	#4
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Horror core. Your vocals are way low man. Turnbthe beat level down a big or turn your vocal levels up. Either that or back off on the vocals compression until the beat isnt drownibg your voice out.. Maybe try a combination og those thibgs until you sound more clear. But as for what your sayi g.. nahh. I can dig that kind of shit once in a while. But its just annoying to me anymore. Mainly the reason i dont listen to necro anymore lol. Kinda sounded lime hat content wise imo. The beat is nice.. and if you fix sou d levels it might actually sound more like your getting at the beat better. But as is this just sounds meh. like phill said.. you got the basics. Try writing some subject matter that is relateable and draws people to want to listen. Tbh.. this just makes me and probably most people want to turn it off. Keep recording man. Not entirely a waste! __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

06-27-2015, 11:10 AM	#6
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	You know you love my style bags __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*