first track recorded, check it out
 

breezin, prod by my homie sunberg

going to start working on a 6-8 track project.

https://soundcloud.com/4lphabe7/bree...d-sunbergsound

Lol why u do that to that man beat thoooo











Lol jk but I can barely hear this n 8 got my volume on max

Why is that

Nm it was my phone

The beat was too distracting from the tone and cadence you used.

Aside from that, whatever kind of subject matter you were going on about wasn't enthralling to me. You weren't talking about anything I could relate to, and it wasn't something that evoked any kind of emotional response. Just "I'm dope and ahead of my time," kind of shit with a dead pan delivery.

Keep spitting homie, you've got the basics.

Horror core.
Your vocals are way low man. Turnbthe beat level down a big or turn your vocal levels up. Either that or back off on the vocals compression until the beat isnt drownibg your voice out..

Maybe try a combination og those thibgs until you sound more clear. But as for what your sayi g.. nahh. I can dig that kind of shit once in a while. But its just annoying to me anymore. Mainly the reason i dont listen to necro anymore lol. Kinda sounded lime hat content wise imo.

The beat is nice.. and if you fix sou d levels it might actually sound more like your getting at the beat better. But as is this just sounds meh.
like phill said.. you got the basics. Try writing some subject matter that is relateable and draws people to want to listen. Tbh.. this just makes me and probably most people want to turn it off.

Keep recording man. Not entirely a waste!

YEA GENO AN SEADAD THE ONLY ONES DROPPING MEDIOCRE HOMEMADE RAP MUSIC ON NETCEES FAGIT GET FAMILIAR!

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