Drencrom Muff 1-2 Vs Lotto Smirk 0-0 - MUFF WINS

[Allen Knight]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, May 21th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

@Drencrom Muff @Lotto Smirk

[El Muffin]

14

[El Muffin]

@Lotto Smirk

LET Me KNO WHEN UR RDU

I'm d0n3

[El Muffin]

aight this is just the beginning

archeologist flow

Tool sifting. Call him Vincent Vega..NO bullshiting
A nigga ride around with Smirk? I'll kill him toward the end if he think that this is pulp fiction
Call me Sam Raimi..kindly screen my head
Ya chickll do it for the vine till she gets fucked in all holes on mine no Evil Dead
Yeah I eyed a hoe. Team played some hot potato
Take your chick to Wolfgang Puck then let my Wolfgang fuck her on an Air Hockey Table
This a home invasion. Fam at ya front door w/ the cans out
It'll be my dog comin through the Screen chasing a Runner like Sandlot
U snitch on ya niggas. Tru story 4 the glory Ud never hack it
Ud call on the rats to free you from them straps..that's a story ripped from edgar Allen
Buddy I'm dope the kid is a misfit u try to provoke but u gettin the biz Ness
The last time you put in a bid for ya city you tried to vote on the Winter Olympics
Bolo script. My Gang is Khans. Ya girl'l pogo stick
Ya bitch'll close her eyes n swim to any nigga that holler no marco polo shit

VA


Creative Ejaculate

[Lotto Smirk]

Muff wi girls is Something to laugh at, stop frontin now ya rap wack
Heard muff cumin up hard his girl says he's only lasts ten secs like a snapchat
changing names, that's flaming lame ya a washout & a nerd kid
Got rid of your attack n ironically the same happened with ya verses
5 days drunk, posting trashy lyrics,please kid I do this with ease
Muff dedicated his life to text .. only to gain kidney failure & liver disease
Past ya prime, quoting yourself as ya role model is frightening
your only on ya Wayne shit cuz ya long in the tooth just like him
Act like the greatest,he's overrated who's better than the rest me
His talent seeing a shrink, exactly what he needs for his addiction to netcees
Ya not top ten, wasted to much of ya life on nc acting like the don
guess you finally made the list .... Benefits ..& .. the unemployment one
Text ain't srs but I'll end your career before the trails done & thru
Save pancake a job .. You should apply mabye he can employ you


Meh rusty

[8===D~~~~(}:]

Tool sifting. Call him Vincent Vega..NO bullshiting
A nigga ride around with Smirk? I'll kill him toward the end if he think that this is pulp fiction
omfg dope
Call me Sam Raimi..kindly screen my head
Ya chickll do it for the vine till she gets fucked in all holes on mine no Evil Dead
lmfao dope af
Yeah I eyed a hoe. Team played some hot potato
Take your chick to Wolfgang Puck then let my Wolfgang fuck her on an Air Hockey Table
Nice this shit is dope
This a home invasion. Fam at ya front door w/ the cans out
It'll be my dog comin through the Screen chasing a Runner like Sandlot
daaaaaamn dope af
U snitch on ya niggas. Tru story 4 the glory Ud never hack it
Ud call on the rats to free you from them straps..that's a story ripped from edgar Allen
beast af you're a god at this
Buddy I'm dope the kid is a misfit u try to provoke but u gettin the biz Ness
The last time you put in a bid for ya city you tried to vote on the Winter Olympics
Fuckin amazingly dope
Bolo script. My Gang is Khans. Ya girl'l pogo stick
Ya bitch'll close her eyes n swim to any nigga that holler no marco polo shit
omfg dope yo!!!


Tbh Idek what I just read bro did you get Lenox or alphadog to write this? How you go from consistently dropping dope to this in no time? Lol come on man you can do better than this..

Vs



Muff wi girls is Something to laugh at, stop frontin now ya rap wack
Heard muff cumin up hard his girl says he's only lasts ten secs like a snapchat
played
changing names, that's flaming lame ya a washout & a nerd kid
Got rid of your attack n ironically the same happened with ya verses
nah man
5 days drunk, posting trashy lyrics,please kid I do this with ease
Muff dedicated his life to text .. only to gain kidney failure & liver disease
coulda been better, meh at best
Past ya prime, quoting yourself as ya role model is frightening
your only on ya Wayne shit cuz ya long in the tooth just like him
im not sure I get this at all..
Act like the greatest,he's overrated who's better than the rest me
His talent seeing a shrink, exactly what he needs for his addiction to netcees
against you had the concept but executed it poorly
Ya not top ten, wasted to much of ya life on nc acting like the don
guess you finally made the list .... Benefits ..& .. the unemployment one
decent personal
Text ain't srs but I'll end your career before the trails done & thru
Save pancake a job .. You should apply mabye he can employ you
no man lol


Damn lotto you could have easily won this based on the shit muff dropped lol but instead you came basic and nothing that stood out.


I guess muff knew he didn't have to drop dope? I'm pissed he wins with a verse like that. So lucky bro lol.

Vote: Muff

[Tic]

Originally Posted by Lil Muffin

aight this is just the beginning

archeologist flow

Tool sifting. Call him Vincent Vega..NO bullshiting
A nigga ride around with Smirk? I'll kill him toward the end if he think that this is pulp fiction
This was ok. Wording was stretched tho.
Call me Sam Raimi..kindly screen my head
Ya chickll do it for the vine till she gets fucked in all holes on mine no Evil Dead
Didn't like this.
Yeah I eyed a hoe. Team played some hot potato
Take your chick to Wolfgang Puck then let my Wolfgang fuck her on an Air Hockey Table
This is weird.
This a home invasion. Fam at ya front door w/ the cans out
It'll be my dog comin through the Screen chasing a Runner like Sandlot
This doesn't rhyme.
U snitch on ya niggas. Tru story 4 the glory Ud never hack it
Ud call on the rats to free you from them straps..that's a story ripped from edgar Allen
Ok?
Buddy I'm dope the kid is a misfit u try to provoke but u gettin the biz Ness
The last time you put in a bid for ya city you tried to vote on the Winter Olympics
Ok, your best line so far.
Bolo script. My Gang is Khans. Ya girl'l pogo stick
Ya bitch'll close her eyes n swim to any nigga that holler no marco polo shit
Didn't like how this was executed. Cool concept tho.

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

Muff wi girls is Something to laugh at, stop frontin now ya rap wack
Heard muff cumin up hard his girl says he's only lasts ten secs like a snapchat
This was ok.
changing names, that's flaming lame ya a washout & a nerd kid
Got rid of your attack n ironically the same happened with ya verses
Not a huge fan of this.
5 days drunk, posting trashy lyrics,please kid I do this with ease
Muff dedicated his life to text .. only to gain kidney failure & liver disease
Ehh.
Past ya prime, quoting yourself as ya role model is frightening
your only on ya Wayne shit cuz ya long in the tooth just like him
Nah.
Act like the greatest,he's overrated who's better than the rest me
His talent seeing a shrink, exactly what he needs for his addiction to netcees
Concept was good, but the execution was not.
Ya not top ten, wasted to much of ya life on nc acting like the don
guess you finally made the list .... Benefits ..& .. the unemployment one
Nah.
Text ain't srs but I'll end your career before the trails done & thru
Save pancake a job .. You should apply mabye he can employ you
Nah.

Man, this was underwhelming. Muff didn't really have much, but I liked a couple of his lines (kinda). His execution seemed off to me and got a bit wordy at times. Lotto definitely seems rusty because he had some good battles in the past. Had a couple nice concepts, just off on the execution. Similar to Muff actually, except Muff had better execution overall, despite some of his fucking weird ass lines. I feel like wording each punch twice with different execution gives you a better idea of what will hit better. With that said, Muff edges this.

[Sharp]

Tool sifting. Call him Vincent Vega..NO bullshiting
A nigga ride around with Smirk? I'll kill him toward the end if he think that this is pulp fiction
cool idea but not too strong
Call me Sam Raimi..kindly screen my head
Ya chickll do it for the vine till she gets fucked in all holes on mine no Evil Dead
swaggin more than anything
Yeah I eyed a hoe. Team played some hot potato
Take your chick to Wolfgang Puck then let my Wolfgang fuck her on an Air Hockey Table
nope
This a home invasion. Fam at ya front door w/ the cans out
It'll be my dog comin through the Screen chasing a Runner like Sandlot
ok idea
U snitch on ya niggas. Tru story 4 the glory Ud never hack it
Ud call on the rats to free you from them straps..that's a story ripped from edgar Allen
rhyme is way off. Also missing what is meant by straps metaphorically
Buddy I'm dope the kid is a misfit u try to provoke but u gettin the biz Ness
The last time you put in a bid for ya city you tried to vote on the Winter Olympics
eh funny
Bolo script. My Gang is Khans. Ya girl'l pogo stick
Ya bitch'll close her eyes n swim to any nigga that holler no marco polo shit
funny ok




Muff wi girls is Something to laugh at, stop frontin now ya rap wack
Heard muff cumin up hard his girl says he's only lasts ten secs like a snapchat
good idea that could a been worded way better
changing names, that's flaming lame ya a washout & a nerd kid
Got rid of your attack n ironically the same happened with ya verses
see the flip. Ok
5 days drunk, posting trashy lyrics,please kid I do this with ease
Muff dedicated his life to text .. only to gain kidney failure & liver disease
OK idea but could hit harder
Past ya prime, quoting yourself as ya role model is frightening
your only on ya Wayne shit cuz ya long in the tooth just like him
is this like with his grill or are you taking a roundabout way to say he's old? Either way not really hitting
Act like the greatest,he's overrated who's better than the rest me
His talent seeing a shrink, exactly what he needs for his addiction to netcees
kinda predictable but personal
Ya not top ten, wasted to much of ya life on nc acting like the don
guess you finally made the list .... Benefits ..& .. the unemployment one
what's with the wording at the end? Kinda weird delivery, took away from this
Text ain't srs but I'll end your career before the trails done & thru
Save pancake a job .. You should apply mabye he can employ you
missing something here


OK I started watching a lot more URL battles than normal when people put up NOME5 links so I get where you're coming from muff but it doesn't always transfer in text well. You can't make me hear 'hack it' rhyme with 'Allen' lol. Respect for trying something new but this isn't the end all be all of text. Lotto not bad, just putting together wording and delivery hurt you here. I liked some ideas and I appreciate you went for personals more than generics but I felt like a lot were just ideas that didn't get totally worked. I know you're a busy man so props for showing and putting thought into it, but I've seen better from you. Next time maybe try the minimum and make em sting more. Feel like you'll do great in the 1-2 league when that happens. That said I think muff had the wording to do more damage. Felt his verse hit harder

V/muff

[fraze]

Originally Posted by Lil Muffin

aight this is just the beginning

archeologist flow

Tool sifting. Call him Vincent Vega..NO bullshiting
A nigga ride around with Smirk? I'll kill him toward the end if he think that this is pulp fiction
not set up well. Who calls him Vincent Vega? Doesn't make sense so its a stretch to me. Wording in the punch is tight tho.
Call me Sam Raimi..kindly screen my head
Ya chickll do it for the vine till she gets fucked in all holes on mine no Evil Dead
see the flip but don't get the reference 100% so this is light to me
Yeah I eyed a hoe. Team played some hot potato
Take your chick to Wolfgang Puck then let my Wolfgang fuck her on an Air Hockey Table
humour bar.
This a home invasion. Fam at ya front door w/ the cans out
It'll be my dog comin through the Screen chasing a Runner like Sandlot
not feeling this
U snitch on ya niggas. Tru story 4 the glory Ud never hack it
Ud call on the rats to free you from them straps..that's a story ripped from edgar Allen
cool lit reference but this doesn't hit hard
Buddy I'm dope the kid is a misfit u try to provoke but u gettin the biz Ness
The last time you put in a bid for ya city you tried to vote on the Winter Olympics
light jab
Bolo script. My Gang is Khans. Ya girl'l pogo stick
Ya bitch'll close her eyes n swim to any nigga that holler no marco polo shit
strong closer. Your best bar. Slight force on Khans but coo
Creative Ejaculate

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

Muff wi girls is Something to laugh at, stop frontin now ya rap wack
Heard muff cumin up hard his girl says he's only lasts ten secs like a snapchat
concept is there but not worded as harsh as it could be
changing names, that's flaming lame ya a washout & a nerd kid
Got rid of your attack n ironically the same happened with ya verses
nope
5 days drunk, posting trashy lyrics,please kid I do this with ease
Muff dedicated his life to text .. only to gain kidney failure & liver disease
this is more sad truth than a punchline. ok i guess
Past ya prime, quoting yourself as ya role model is frightening
your only on ya Wayne shit cuz ya long in the tooth just like him
long in the tooth is a weak diss
Act like the greatest,he's overrated who's better than the rest me
His talent seeing a shrink, exactly what he needs for his addiction to netcees
horrible wording. if you rephrased this would hit so much harder
Ya not top ten, wasted to much of ya life on nc acting like the don
guess you finally made the list .... Benefits ..& .. the unemployment one
nice concept. Better wording
Text ain't srs but I'll end your career before the trails done & thru
Save pancake a job .. You should apply mabye he can employ you
nah

Meh rusty

muff has marco polo and maybe Wolfgang for lols. Smirk only had unemployment list really. Muff verse was pretty bland to me, other than the LOTB closer. Smirk had some nice creativity in concepts but missed with bad wording. Honestly a close one to me because Smirks misses werent that bad but his hits weren't as good as Muffs.

Real talk this is a close one to call. Honestly I'd probably vote tie if that's possible. If not I want to reward the more creative verse, which in this case is Smirk. Props to both of you. Good battle.

vote tie, tiebreaker to Smirk

[Destroyer]

I got smirk here. wtf is this shit muff? call him Vincent vega? why? call me sam raimi? no
Lotto is obv rusty, but liver disease was decent, opener was decent. none of muff's verse went at lotto. you could have dropped that shit against anyone. fuck outta here

v/lotto

[Wanderer]

Originally Posted by Lil Muffin

aight this is just the beginning

archeologist flow

Tool sifting. Call him Vincent Vega..NO bullshiting
A nigga ride around with Smirk? I'll kill him toward the end if he think that this is pulp fiction
No
Call me Sam Raimi..kindly screen my head
Ya chickll do it for the vine till she gets fucked in all holes on mine no Evil Dead
Err
Yeah I eyed a hoe. Team played some hot potato
Take your chick to Wolfgang Puck then let my Wolfgang fuck her on an Air Hockey Table
Not terrible
This a home invasion. Fam at ya front door w/ the cans out
It'll be my dog comin through the Screen chasing a Runner like Sandlot
I don't know if you cares about the rhyme but the fact it didn't at all just took everything away. Not that hard anyway
U snitch on ya niggas. Tru story 4 the glory Ud never hack it
Ud call on the rats to free you from them straps..that's a story ripped from edgar Allen
Same as above, No
Buddy I'm dope the kid is a misfit u try to provoke but u gettin the biz Ness
The last time you put in a bid for ya city you tried to vote on the Winter Olympics
not feeling
Bolo script. My Gang is Khans. Ya girl'l pogo stick
Ya bitch'll close her eyes n swim to any nigga that holler no marco polo shit
Nah
VA


Creative Ejaculate

Vs

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

Muff wi girls is Something to laugh at, stop frontin now ya rap wack
Heard muff cumin up hard his girl says he's only lasts ten secs like a snapchat
ok
changing names, that's flaming lame ya a washout & a nerd kid
Got rid of your attack n ironically the same happened with ya verses
wasn't feeling
5 days drunk, posting trashy lyrics,please kid I do this with ease
Muff dedicated his life to text .. only to gain kidney failure & liver disease
nothing clever
Past ya prime, quoting yourself as ya role model is frightening
your only on ya Wayne shit cuz ya long in the tooth just like him
what
Act like the greatest,he's overrated who's better than the rest me
His talent seeing a shrink, exactly what he needs for his addiction to netcees
predictable
Ya not top ten, wasted to much of ya life on nc acting like the don
guess you finally made the list .... Benefits ..& .. the unemployment one
i guess this wasn't terrible
Text ain't srs but I'll end your career before the trails done & thru
Save pancake a job .. You should apply mabye he can employ you
don't get

Meh rusty

This wasn't the best battle, had lotto but only cos the misses weren't as obscure. Nothing really hit hard here for me

V/LS

[jilti]

Gonna vote on my lunch break..
Will edit in my vote here..

[Sn00p]

lotto had snap chat and shrink. muff had the last two. difference is, Muff's were flipped better in my opinion. not by far tho. also the concepts in his non quotes were nicer imo. lotto seemed a bit rusty, but the concepts were def there. i can see him get back to full quickly. muff still struggling w/ his style. go back to shit like ur Eisenhower line, that was dope. but I think it was still enough to edge it here. both could've been better, but still a close battle w/ some creative concepts. props.
v/muff

[jilti]

Tool sifting. Call him Vincent Vega..NO bullshiting
A nigga ride around with Smirk? I'll kill him toward the end if he think that this is pulp fiction
ok
Call me Sam Raimi..kindly screen my head
Ya chickll do it for the vine till she gets fucked in all holes on mine no Evil Dead
borderline
Yeah I eyed a hoe. Team played some hot potato
Take your chick to Wolfgang Puck then let my Wolfgang fuck her on an Air Hockey Table
hell no wtf were u thinking?
This a home invasion. Fam at ya front door w/ the cans out
It'll be my dog comin through the Screen chasing a Runner like Sandlot
url type bar, i fucks wit it
U snitch on ya niggas. Tru story 4 the glory Ud never hack it
Ud call on the rats to free you from them straps..that's a story ripped from edgar Allen
another url bar, cool
Buddy I'm dope the kid is a misfit u try to provoke but u gettin the biz Ness
The last time you put in a bid for ya city you tried to vote on the Winter Olympics
dope
Bolo script. My Gang is Khans. Ya girl'l pogo stick
Ya bitch'll close her eyes n swim to any nigga that holler no marco polo shit
coulda been worded better


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Muff wi girls is Something to laugh at, stop frontin now ya rap wack
Heard muff cumin up hard his girl says he's only lasts ten secs like a snapchat
wasn't bad but didnt land imo
changing names, that's flaming lame ya a washout & a nerd kid
Got rid of your attack n ironically the same happened with ya verses
cool
5 days drunk, posting trashy lyrics,please kid I do this with ease
Muff dedicated his life to text .. only to gain kidney failure & liver disease
good
Past ya prime, quoting yourself as ya role model is frightening
your only on ya Wayne shit cuz ya long in the tooth just like him
feelin it
Act like the greatest,he's overrated who's better than the rest me
His talent seeing a shrink, exactly what he needs for his addiction to netcees
good
Ya not top ten, wasted to much of ya life on nc acting like the don
guess you finally made the list .... Benefits ..& .. the unemployment one
nah
Text ain't srs but I'll end your career before the trails done & thru
Save pancake a job .. You should apply mabye he can employ you
no

Good personals from lotto but became a little repetitive. Was feeling muffs verse slightly more. good battle tho, can see why this is close
V-muff