Delicate

dull boy · 12-29-2014, 10:48 PM

A scent descendant of Romans. A myth. The aroma of bliss, kissed by the solstice of sin. Equinox eating off the rose to its stem. Petal by petal he opened her lips and sipped from the meadow til she broke into bits. Karma selective. Eclectics. Starved for affection. The martyrs. Strip your armor. Your heart; I'll protect it. Perfection shredded by the flaws in your essence. So precious. Delicatessen. You're what blossoms in the gardens of heaven. I wipe the sleep from my eyes; dreams from my night, and still can't believe that I'm awake when she exists. Every second with her is heaven on earth. She's the closest to an angel that an atheist can get.

dull boy · 12-30-2014, 08:18 AM

lol

Oh, taggers, you slay me.

big baby · 12-30-2014, 09:24 AM

I can see taggers and trust me dey all FUCKA suck lol!

good stuff, delicatessen. more literal phrasing PLZ

Wise Wiggles · 12-30-2014, 10:46 AM

I like this little thing you did in here. relaxing for me. <3.

This was sexy:

Equinox eating off the rose to its stem. Petal by petal he opened her lips and sipped from the meadow til she broke into bits.

El Muffin · 12-30-2014, 08:45 PM

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Originally Posted by dull boy

lol

Oh, taggers, you slay me.

HUEHUEMUAHHHUEHMUWAHHAHAHAAA- I did all 4 of the gud ones

I liked this though. too short but your a fkn rhymesmith. iono if I like you much as a human being but I cant deny your capability as a writer.

keep the quill going brother

Bodey · 12-31-2014, 02:25 AM

Ha this was dope. As a reader, I feel tickled with love

Greed · 12-31-2014, 03:21 PM

I made the other tag because I hate you as a human being. As for your writing we've discussed this before.

dull boy · 12-31-2014, 03:29 PM

Gardians of Heaven is my favorite. Cum from my eyes is a close second.

holocene · 01-01-2015, 02:48 AM

Hello dull boy. The rap was very good. The dreams line was the best part. That line tied the verse together but it didn't have to be complicated to do it. The sentences rhymed together, but they all could stand by themselves just as easily.

Zen · 01-01-2015, 04:15 AM

I had a drunk talk with a Christian about heaven and god just a few hours ago. It was emotional as fuck. He was talking about all the books of the bible that were taken out (he heavily implied there was a conspiracy because he was drunk), then we took shots of crown royal because he thought god had forgotten him. He was sobbing uncontrollably at this point. It was fucking sad, man. Not for me because I'm agnostic on the verge of atheism, but to see this grown man with a wife and two children break down into drunk tears calling God out was terrifying to me on an emotional level. I'm still devastated. It reminded me of your last line of this and I said that to him about his wife and kids from my perspective and he stopped crying. You stopped a potential New Year's disaster without knowing you did it. Happy New Years, man. I hope all is well with you and yours.

Arid · 01-01-2015, 04:22 AM

that's real

El Muffin · 01-01-2015, 07:23 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zen King

I had a drunk talk with a Christian about heaven and god just a few hours ago. It was emotional as fuck. He was talking about all the books of the bible that were taken out (he heavily implied there was a conspiracy because he was drunk), then we took shots of crown royal because he thought god had forgotten him. He was sobbing uncontrollably at this point. It was fucking sad, man. Not for me because I'm agnostic on the verge of atheism, but to see this grown man with a wife and two children break down into drunk tears calling God out was terrifying to me on an emotional level. I'm still devastated. It reminded me of your last line of this and I said that to him about his wife and kids from my perspective and he stopped crying. You stopped a potential New Year's disaster without knowing you did it. Happy New Years, man. I hope all is well with you and yours.

damn. i know you guys pretty much think im a fkn retard or something ..but tell him(or not..would be kind of silly i know) that I too was lost for many years of my life(atheist) but something happened one day and I was so fucking overwhelmed by a presence that i couldn't control my emotions for that days duration. I wish i could explain it better. Im not that eloquent. But it was insanely real. It was like a flood of dopamine that came seemingly out of nowhere. Just started crying. It was beautiful. My attitude towards people changed. My path was set. You will know what im talking about when you feel it. I wish i could guarantee that it will happen to everyone who seeks it out..but i don't know how he/it operates. I just was incredibly thankful that it did man. Because up until that point I swear I was doing everything to discredit its existence.

tell him to just carry himself with grace and he will see the results. Keep in mind that whilst hes doing this..he wont be immune to sin. We all partake in it. But its the effort that counts.

I swear im seeing results....the people i encounter notice it as well. Nevermind this internet shit. I wish i knew some of you in real life so you could see what im talking bout.
I have no enemies. Even when i do encounter assholes or downright evil people...i stay par for the course and keep beating them over the head with my approach until i see a breakthrough. it eventually happens.

am i just spouting off nonsensical gibberish to you guys or u feel what im saying?

idc man. but im so fkn serious.

i will pray for him tonight. and for all of you

btw its weird..because i cant even lie to you guys and say Jesus or w.e spoke to me... lol no

But man. Enlightenment is a mfer. and it feels so damn good.

I work 12 hr shifts constantly smiling, offering words of encouragement..get off work not even tired and begin helping people on the next shift

I have never felt this way in my entire life..and frankly i love what has happened to me.

AND TO THINK I THOUGHT IT WAS ALL BS WHEN PREACHERS SPOKE OF "PERPETUAL BENEVOLENCE"

dull boy · 01-01-2015, 08:33 AM

Weird.

big baby · 01-01-2015, 09:36 AM

muff i hope you die you stupid nigger

dull boy · 01-01-2015, 11:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zen King

I had a drunk talk with a Christian about heaven and god just a few hours ago. It was emotional as fuck. He was talking about all the books of the bible that were taken out (he heavily implied there was a conspiracy because he was drunk), then we took shots of crown royal because he thought god had forgotten him. He was sobbing uncontrollably at this point. It was fucking sad, man. Not for me because I'm agnostic on the verge of atheism, but to see this grown man with a wife and two children break down into drunk tears calling God out was terrifying to me on an emotional level. I'm still devastated. It reminded me of your last line of this and I said that to him about his wife and kids from my perspective and he stopped crying. You stopped a potential New Year's disaster without knowing you did it. Happy New Years, man. I hope all is well with you and yours.

Srs?

Zen · 01-01-2015, 11:31 AM

Srs.

El Muffin · 01-01-2015, 09:22 PM

whats so weird about it @dull boy

El Muffin · 01-01-2015, 09:42 PM

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Originally Posted by BANE BABY

muff i hope you die you stupid nigger

we all do?

Plot · 01-02-2015, 12:44 AM

Niceish little thing you wrote Dull, should have been a little longer.

Muffs turned into a 'sad idiot person' itt.

El Muffin · 01-02-2015, 03:01 AM

god if I didnt feel like fucking dullboys thread up furthermore id fucking devour you right now.

what was idiotic about what I posted? let me guess..the grammar wasn't proper?

fuck you grammar Nazi

every battle verse you've written is idiotic

idiotic that fucker

@Plot

12-29-2014, 10:48 PM	#1
dull boy consults Lloyd Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 4,053 Battle Record: 0-8 Champed -1-2 Punch League Roast Rep Power: 39345604	Delicate A scent descendant of Romans. A myth. The aroma of bliss, kissed by the solstice of sin. Equinox eating off the rose to its stem. Petal by petal he opened her lips and sipped from the meadow til she broke into bits. Karma selective. Eclectics. Starved for affection. The martyrs. Strip your armor. Your heart; I'll protect it. Perfection shredded by the flaws in your essence. So precious. Delicatessen. You're what blossoms in the gardens of heaven. I wipe the sleep from my eyes; dreams from my night, and still can't believe that I'm awake when she exists. Every second with her is heaven on earth. She's the closest to an angel that an atheist can get.

12-30-2014, 10:46 AM	#4
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	I like this little thing you did in here. relaxing for me. <3. This was sexy: Equinox eating off the rose to its stem. Petal by petal he opened her lips and sipped from the meadow til she broke into bits. __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch" Last edited by Wise Wiggles; 12-30-2014 at 10:53 AM.

01-01-2015, 09:22 PM	#17
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	whats so weird about it @dull boy __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

01-02-2015, 03:01 AM	#20
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	god if I didnt feel like fucking dullboys thread up furthermore id fucking devour you right now. what was idiotic about what I posted? let me guess..the grammar wasn't proper? fuck you grammar Nazi every battle verse you've written is idiotic idiotic that fucker @Plot __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

12-30-2014, 08:18 AM	#2
dull boy consults Lloyd Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 4,053 Battle Record: 0-8 Champed -1-2 Punch League Roast Rep Power: 39345604	lol Oh, taggers, you slay me.

12-31-2014, 03:21 PM	#7
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,721 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975687	I made the other tag because I hate you as a human being. As for your writing we've discussed this before.

12-31-2014, 03:29 PM	#8
dull boy consults Lloyd Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 4,053 Battle Record: 0-8 Champed -1-2 Punch League Roast Rep Power: 39345604	Gardians of Heaven is my favorite. Cum from my eyes is a close second.

01-01-2015, 02:48 AM	#9
holocene brkn lghts Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 9 Rep Power: 0	Hello dull boy. The rap was very good. The dreams line was the best part. That line tied the verse together but it didn't have to be complicated to do it. The sentences rhymed together, but they all could stand by themselves just as easily.

01-01-2015, 04:15 AM	#10
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	I had a drunk talk with a Christian about heaven and god just a few hours ago. It was emotional as fuck. He was talking about all the books of the bible that were taken out (he heavily implied there was a conspiracy because he was drunk), then we took shots of crown royal because he thought god had forgotten him. He was sobbing uncontrollably at this point. It was fucking sad, man. Not for me because I'm agnostic on the verge of atheism, but to see this grown man with a wife and two children break down into drunk tears calling God out was terrifying to me on an emotional level. I'm still devastated. It reminded me of your last line of this and I said that to him about his wife and kids from my perspective and he stopped crying. You stopped a potential New Year's disaster without knowing you did it. Happy New Years, man. I hope all is well with you and yours.

01-01-2015, 04:22 AM	#11
Arid HONGRY Join Date: Nov 2014 Posts: 57 Battle Record: 2-2 Rep Power: 0	that's real

01-01-2015, 08:33 AM	#13
dull boy consults Lloyd Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 4,053 Battle Record: 0-8 Champed -1-2 Punch League Roast Rep Power: 39345604	Weird.

01-01-2015, 11:31 AM	#16
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Srs.

01-02-2015, 12:44 AM	#19
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,374 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309744	Niceish little thing you wrote Dull, should have been a little longer. Muffs turned into a 'sad idiot person' itt.