Delicate
 

A scent descendant of Romans. A myth. The aroma of bliss, kissed by the solstice of sin. Equinox eating off the rose to its stem. Petal by petal he opened her lips and sipped from the meadow til she broke into bits. Karma selective. Eclectics. Starved for affection. The martyrs. Strip your armor. Your heart; I'll protect it. Perfection shredded by the flaws in your essence. So precious. Delicatessen. You're what blossoms in the gardens of heaven. I wipe the sleep from my eyes; dreams from my night, and still can't believe that I'm awake when she exists. Every second with her is heaven on earth. She's the closest to an angel that an atheist can get.

lol

Oh, taggers, you slay me.

I can see taggers and trust me dey all FUCKA suck lol!

good stuff, delicatessen. more literal phrasing PLZ

I like this little thing you did in here. relaxing for me. <3.

This was sexy:

Equinox eating off the rose to its stem. Petal by petal he opened her lips and sipped from the meadow til she broke into bits.

HUEHUEMUAHHHUEHMUWAHHAHAHAAA- I did all 4 of the gud ones

I liked this though. too short but your a fkn rhymesmith. iono if I like you much as a human being but I cant deny your capability as a writer.

keep the quill going brother

Ha this was dope. As a reader, I feel tickled with love

I made the other tag because I hate you as a human being. As for your writing we've discussed this before.

Gardians of Heaven is my favorite. Cum from my eyes is a close second.

Hello dull boy. The rap was very good. The dreams line was the best part. That line tied the verse together but it didn't have to be complicated to do it. The sentences rhymed together, but they all could stand by themselves just as easily.

I had a drunk talk with a Christian about heaven and god just a few hours ago. It was emotional as fuck. He was talking about all the books of the bible that were taken out (he heavily implied there was a conspiracy because he was drunk), then we took shots of crown royal because he thought god had forgotten him. He was sobbing uncontrollably at this point. It was fucking sad, man. Not for me because I'm agnostic on the verge of atheism, but to see this grown man with a wife and two children break down into drunk tears calling God out was terrifying to me on an emotional level. I'm still devastated. It reminded me of your last line of this and I said that to him about his wife and kids from my perspective and he stopped crying. You stopped a potential New Year's disaster without knowing you did it. Happy New Years, man. I hope all is well with you and yours.

that's real

damn. i know you guys pretty much think im a fkn retard or something ..but tell him(or not..would be kind of silly i know) that I too was lost for many years of my life(atheist) but something happened one day and I was so fucking overwhelmed by a presence that i couldn't control my emotions for that days duration. I wish i could explain it better. Im not that eloquent. But it was insanely real. It was like a flood of dopamine that came seemingly out of nowhere. Just started crying. It was beautiful. My attitude towards people changed. My path was set. You will know what im talking about when you feel it. I wish i could guarantee that it will happen to everyone who seeks it out..but i don't know how he/it operates. I just was incredibly thankful that it did man. Because up until that point I swear I was doing everything to discredit its existence.

tell him to just carry himself with grace and he will see the results. Keep in mind that whilst hes doing this..he wont be immune to sin. We all partake in it. But its the effort that counts.

I swear im seeing results....the people i encounter notice it as well. Nevermind this internet shit. I wish i knew some of you in real life so you could see what im talking bout.
I have no enemies. Even when i do encounter assholes or downright evil people...i stay par for the course and keep beating them over the head with my approach until i see a breakthrough. it eventually happens.

am i just spouting off nonsensical gibberish to you guys or u feel what im saying?

idc man. but im so fkn serious.

i will pray for him tonight. and for all of you

btw its weird..because i cant even lie to you guys and say Jesus or w.e spoke to me... lol no

But man. Enlightenment is a mfer. and it feels so damn good.

I work 12 hr shifts constantly smiling, offering words of encouragement..get off work not even tired and begin helping people on the next shift

I have never felt this way in my entire life..and frankly i love what has happened to me.

AND TO THINK I THOUGHT IT WAS ALL BS WHEN PREACHERS SPOKE OF "PERPETUAL BENEVOLENCE"

Weird.

muff i hope you die you stupid nigger

Srs?

Srs.

whats so weird about it @dull boy

we all do?

Niceish little thing you wrote Dull, should have been a little longer.

Muffs turned into a 'sad idiot person' itt.

god if I didnt feel like fucking dullboys thread up furthermore id fucking devour you right now.

what was idiotic about what I posted? let me guess..the grammar wasn't proper?

fuck you grammar Nazi

every battle verse you've written is idiotic

idiotic that fucker

@Plot