03-30-2023, 05:36 PM
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SYRACUSE
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Originally Posted by Pharaohs Army
Loved it...particularly the first 3/4ths...
Thought the end kind of "devolved" a bit into a keystyle about how you can nab young girls and a few flexes...
Whereas the majority/meat of the piece was cleverly done I thought, arguably loosely topicalizing my own life, particularly at the time this was written...so I RELATED to it (how could I not, ffs lol)...and was thoroughly ENTERTAINED by most of it...which is WHY I read & write.
I like reading "real" NYC verses...and I felt that this one fit that bill, regardless of the lazier ending.
***Certainly could be a generic psychobabble verse about any random dude who thinks he's smarter than he is...but I'm just telling you that I related, esp. after our brief conversations/interactions during that year...
SHOW for aowl...thanks, take care
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Shiettt
7 / 8 years later
I’ll take it….
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