Write Night II: [The Finals] NYCSPITZ vs Darth Yoda [NYCSPITZ WINS]

Geno · 07-18-2013, 09:40 PM

good showing.

darth came in nice, you have a dark sense about you which i enjoy. clearly noticed this here
The Grim Reapers dick squeeze. I'm his Number one crush.
thought that line was cool. seemed a little random at times tho

nyc, clean verse. great storytelling here as oppose to what you did in rnd 1-2. had a dope love story thing going on and quite the smooth read to it.

i got nyc here with a slightly fresher verse and cleaner concept.
good battle.

props to both for making the finals

07-18-2013, 09:40 PM	#11
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	good showing. darth came in nice, you have a dark sense about you which i enjoy. clearly noticed this here The Grim Reapers dick squeeze. I'm his Number one crush. thought that line was cool. seemed a little random at times tho nyc, clean verse. great storytelling here as oppose to what you did in rnd 1-2. had a dope love story thing going on and quite the smooth read to it. i got nyc here with a slightly fresher verse and cleaner concept. good battle. props to both for making the finals __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*