Dipping my microships in gasoline sauce

PancakeBrah · 07-15-2013, 11:51 PM

99% amazing. The tailors on strike simile was off-putting compared to the tone and rest of the language of the piece. Explosive nature I didn't like for some reason, jarred me while reading it. Other than that the best piece I've read on this iteration of NC. I think I've said that about another piece before but that piece sucks. The adams apple theme in the middle was excellent, started off okay then really went somewhere with the adams apple line and imagery. Poignantly worded, full of regret. Something substantial amid the everyday drops around here.

07-15-2013, 11:51 PM	#3
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	99% amazing. The tailors on strike simile was off-putting compared to the tone and rest of the language of the piece. Explosive nature I didn't like for some reason, jarred me while reading it. Other than that the best piece I've read on this iteration of NC. I think I've said that about another piece before but that piece sucks. The adams apple theme in the middle was excellent, started off okay then really went somewhere with the adams apple line and imagery. Poignantly worded, full of regret. Something substantial amid the everyday drops around here. __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder