Dipping my microships in gasoline sauce

CopyPat · 07-15-2013, 11:49 PM

Interesting... i don't really know how to feed this. was kindof a poetic style, not my cup a tea. hard for me to critique this or give props on... the rhyming was average but that wasn't what this was about. u had some interesting wordplays or puns on adam and eve and apples i guess.. idunno. it just left me feeling a little empty, like i don't really know what to think of it. its something im not used to style wize.

Do yourself a favor and read all of Vulgar's drops in this section. He has like 4 or 5 in the last 2 weeks . I think you will like all of them man.

sorry for the wack feed, check my piece in here right now and tell me what u think

07-15-2013, 11:49 PM	#2
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	Interesting... i don't really know how to feed this. was kindof a poetic style, not my cup a tea. hard for me to critique this or give props on... the rhyming was average but that wasn't what this was about. u had some interesting wordplays or puns on adam and eve and apples i guess.. idunno. it just left me feeling a little empty, like i don't really know what to think of it. its something im not used to style wize. Do yourself a favor and read all of Vulgar's drops in this section. He has like 4 or 5 in the last 2 weeks . I think you will like all of them man. sorry for the wack feed, check my piece in here right now and tell me what u think __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete. Last edited by CopyPat; 07-16-2013 at 12:03 AM.