Meth v Atomic - {Meth wins}

[Sharp]

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  July 11th, 2013 at 11:59 PM PST.
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@Meth @Atomic

[Atomic]

Hi

In

Let's keep it at 10 since we've battle each other twice the last 2 weeks
@Atomic

[Atomic]

Meth aka Liquid

he's a mod w/ the the tendency to d-ride, this faggot is still done,
& to protect his replica dick, cuz chicks won't go near the real one.
after this L? this over-rated faggot mod-slave will be hating himself,
rofl @ the way bags handled liquid.. you'd think it was canadian milk.
grab my glock &... jk. but still i'll hope that ur dead,
u'll dia-sick faggot.. trust me, after this ur name will never be spoken again.
shoot the fucking homo in the face just to save his misery,
u've never pulled a bird in ur life, i'd be shocked if hes EVER gave the Chickadee.
reign down on this faggot until my men are ready to storm,
cuz ull see methyl prove to be a fake, yet he takes plenty of forms.

sigh

Let's Dance

Honestly I think you're gay, I don't really have a reason why
I feel it in my gut, and I'm pretty sure you scream that when you're w/ your guy
Why are you always on my dick, are you planning to meet?
Since I'm super soap I hope I start rubbing off on u, because god damnit u stink
I get pussy whenever, hit and quit then back to merkin nerds
For you one night stand just happens to be your week's quota sellin' furniture
Ask about me around the net, Meth's a go getter my friend
The only Story around the net about you is that you're not even better than him
I buy chicks nice clothes, animal skins and they love to do me
The only time Atomic chaeuffer, is driving me and my crew to the movies

[Flow]

Originally Posted by Atomic

Meth aka Liquid

he's a mod w/ the the tendency to d-ride, this faggot is still done,
& to protect his replica dick, cuz chicks won't go near the real one.
ok
after this L? this over-rated faggot mod-slave will be hating himself,
rofl @ the way bags handled liquid.. you'd think it was canadian milk.
nah
grab my glock &... jk. but still i'll hope that ur dead,
u'll dia-sick faggot.. trust me, after this ur name will never be spoken again.
so so
shoot the fucking homo in the face just to save his misery,
u've never pulled a bird in ur life, i'd be shocked if hes EVER gave the Chickadee.
ok wordplay did it
reign down on this faggot until my men are ready to storm,
cuz ull see methyl prove to be a fake, yet he takes plenty of forms.no

Originally Posted by Meth

sigh

Let's Dance

Honestly I think you're gay, I don't really have a reason why
I feel it in my gut, and I'm pretty sure you scream that when you're w/ your guy
lol
Why are you always on my dick, are you planning to meet?
Since I'm super soap I hope I start rubbing off on u, because god damnit u stink
meh not very hard hitting
I get pussy whenever, hit and quit then back to merkin nerds
For you one night stand just happens to be your week's quota sellin' furniture
so so
Ask about me around the net, Meth's a go getter my friend
The only Story around the net about you is that you're not even better than him
obvious but ok
I buy chicks nice clothes, animal skins and they love to do me
The only time Atomic chaeuffer, is driving me and my crew to the moviesnice wordplay

To be honest this was as I predicted, you've had to many run ins in to short a time frame, so it was a battle of the generic punchlines... Meth came a bit cheesy, but all of his were set up with a ok punchline and he brought some humour and wordplay. Atomic used the D=dick thing a bit too much and had a few misses, liked his opener, the chickadee for the wordplay, felt the bags personal was a miss and didn't like the close.

Voting Meth for better misses.

[Sharp]

he's a mod w/ the the tendency to d-ride, this faggot is still done,
& to protect his replica dick, cuz chicks won't go near the real one.
wp isn't very clear, kinda scattered on the punch
after this L? this over-rated faggot mod-slave will be hating himself,
rofl @ the way bags handled liquid.. you'd think it was canadian milk.
ok flip but Bags/bag is done to hell
grab my glock &... jk. but still i'll hope that ur dead,
u'll dia-sick faggot.. trust me, after this ur name will never be spoken again.
He whose name shall not be spoken/die a sick has been done plenty
shoot the fucking homo in the face just to save his misery,
u've never pulled a bird in ur life, i'd be shocked if hes EVER gave the Chickadee.
alright but couldve been worded more smoothly
reign down on this faggot until my men are ready to storm,
cuz ull see methyl prove to be a fake, yet he takes plenty of forms.
cool idea, but im not sure if meth's minions are a great thing to go after cause they're literally a joke


Honestly I think you're gay, I don't really have a reason why
I feel it in my gut, and I'm pretty sure you scream that when you're w/ your guy
lol nice
Why are you always on my dick, are you planning to meet?
Since I'm super soap I hope I start rubbing off on u, because god damnit u stink
meh
I get pussy whenever, hit and quit then back to merkin nerds
For you one night stand just happens to be your week's quota sellin' furniture
funny, not too hard hitting
Ask about me around the net, Meth's a go getter my friend
The only Story around the net about you is that you're not even better than him
ok
I buy chicks nice clothes, animal skins and they love to do me
The only time Atomic chaeuffer, is driving me and my crew to the movies
chauffeur/show for is played to hell, brownie points for being a fresher with it


even in quotes but meth's were better. he didnt have any big misses while atomic wasn't quite there with a few bars. Meth got it. cool battle

v/ meth

[Spoken]

Atomic had cool ideas just no execution on it that fully made it connect... But it's expected since ya battled plenty times ya know in two weeks so Name flips arent appealing this time around... The liquid is played but you came a little different and the He whose name shall not be spoken punch is a reach honestly cus that's old old news slot of misses just ideas floating and your opener just heavily over thought my man

Vs.

The your guy bar was a nice hit and the chauffer was ok ... Damn you for using my name again in one of your verses lol... But overall I got meth on the winning side due to have better connectin and harder hits and less misses wasn't great punches or hard but it connected

[CymbiCort]

Atomic, I'm not going to lie to you, I've seen you come harder than this before. I've seen your other shit and was generally impressed, but I honestly can't say the same for this verse. You had a couple of decent jabs, but nothing that really stood out to me. The line I felt the most from your verse was your opener, then I felt you gradually slipped up towards the end, almost like you stopped caring. With that being said, it still wasn't a bad verse, just needed more polishing.

Meth, first bar was OK but I liked Atomics opener better. the next bar, /meet/stink I felt it was a bit forced even though I know it rhymes, but you could of definitely rhymed it better IMO. Still a decent hit/concept.The next two bars weren't anything noteworthy but connected enough. It was the closer that gave Meth the win IMO, the chauffeur/show fur play was dope for sure, and it was a clear victory at this point for Meth.

V: Meth.

[Loast]

Originally Posted by Atomic

Meth aka Liquid

he's a mod w/ the the tendency to d-ride, this faggot is still done,
& to protect his replica dick, cuz chicks won't go near the real one.
not so good
after this L? this over-rated faggot mod-slave will be hating himself,
rofl @ the way bags handled liquid.. you'd think it was canadian milk.
lol... this was good
grab my glock &... jk. but still i'll hope that ur dead,
u'll dia-sick faggot.. trust me, after this ur name will never be spoken again.
nice.. could've been worded to hit harder tho
shoot the fucking homo in the face just to save his misery,
u've never pulled a bird in ur life, i'd be shocked if hes EVER gave the Chickadee.
blah.. decent at best
reign down on this faggot until my men are ready to storm,
cuz ull see methyl prove to be a fake, yet he takes plenty of forms.
[b]hahaha... this was pretty good.. setup could've made it dope tho

Originally Posted by Meth

sigh

Let's Dance

Honestly I think you're gay, I don't really have a reason why
I feel it in my gut, and I'm pretty sure you scream that when you're w/ your guy
generic same old same old
Why are you always on my dick, are you planning to meet?
Since I'm super soap I hope I start rubbing off on u, because god damnit u stink
nice.... set up is fucking gay tho.
I get pussy whenever, hit and quit then back to merkin nerds
For you one night stand just happens to be your week's quota sellin' furniture
Ask about me around the net, Meth's a go getter my friend
generic same old same old
The only Story around the net about you is that you're not even better than him
hahaha... pretty good here
I buy chicks nice clothes, animal skins and they love to do me
The only time Atomic chaeuffer, is driving me and my crew to the movies
[b]blah...

v- Meth

his verse was slightly better but it seems u write the same generic shit as everyone else but doesn't come off that good.. instead of imitating u should try innovating with ur ideas

[Slowhands]

A

he's a mod w/ the the tendency to d-ride, this faggot is still done,
& to protect his replica dick, cuz chicks won't go near the real one.
- meh
after this L? this over-rated faggot mod-slave will be hating himself,
rofl @ the way bags handled liquid.. you'd think it was canadian milk.
- ok
grab my glock &... jk. but still i'll hope that ur dead,
u'll dia-sick faggot.. trust me, after this ur name will never be spoken again.
- nah
shoot the fucking homo in the face just to save his misery,
u've never pulled a bird in ur life, i'd be shocked if hes EVER gave the Chickadee.
- forced/played ish
reign down on this faggot until my men are ready to storm,
cuz ull see methyl prove to be a fake, yet he takes plenty of forms.
- typical feel

you started ok and seem to run out of fresh concepts the more you went. few lines ok, most not, ending was weaker than your start.


M

Honestly I think you're gay, I don't really have a reason why
I feel it in my gut, and I'm pretty sure you scream that when you're w/ your guy
funny ok
Why are you always on my dick, are you planning to meet?
Since I'm super soap I hope I start rubbing off on u, because god damnit u stink
funny but not witty
I get pussy whenever, hit and quit then back to merkin nerds
For you one night stand just happens to be your week's quota sellin' furniture
lol
Ask about me around the net, Meth's a go getter my friend
The only Story around the net about you is that you're not even better than him
nah
I buy chicks nice clothes, animal skins and they love to do me
The only time Atomic chaeuffer, is driving me and my crew to the movies
meh ok

you had an ok verse. pretty consistent punches and a few that were funny and only one that was fresh funny. still enough for the W


overall this was an ok battle. Atomic came ok but lost effectiveness toward the middle and end of his verse. Meth was more consistent bar for bar. easy vote

[FGR]

he's a mod w/ the the tendency to d-ride, this faggot is still done,
& to protect his replica dick, cuz chicks won't go near the real one.
shoot the fucking homo in the face just to save his misery,
u've never pulled a bird in ur life, i'd be shocked if hes EVER gave the Chickadee.

vs

Honestly I think you're gay, I don't really have a reason why
I feel it in my gut, and I'm pretty sure you scream that when you're w/ your guy
I get pussy whenever, hit and quit then back to merkin nerds
For you one night stand just happens to be your week's quota sellin' furniture
I buy chicks nice clothes, animal skins and they love to do me
The only time Atomic chaeuffer, is driving me and my crew to the moviesn


v/meth ..atomic had two mild hits, nothing special..meth came w/ ok jabs i really liked the one night stand concept just
thought he could have been done better..show-fur line ive seen once or twice..def seen show-for a bunch..idk just didnt seem hard to me.. but still decent. n decent enough for the W

[Gazette]

Meth aka Liquid

he's a mod w/ the the tendency to d-ride, this faggot is still done,
& to protect his replica dick, cuz chicks won't go near the real one.

what? no, this wasnt clear at all

after this L? this over-rated faggot mod-slave will be hating himself,
rofl @ the way bags handled liquid.. you'd think it was canadian milk.

decent punch. rhyming was horrible

grab my glock &... jk. but still i'll hope that ur dead,
u'll dia-sick faggot.. trust me, after this ur name will never be spoken again.

no

shoot the fucking homo in the face just to save his misery,
u've never pulled a bird in ur life, i'd be shocked if hes EVER gave the Chickadee.

Liked this, best line so far, no complaints

reign down on this faggot until my men are ready to storm,
cuz ull see methyl prove to be a fake, yet he takes plenty of forms.

setup line was stupid filler, (the expression is 'rain down' by the way) - punch had potential but the delivery was shit. at least u had a 4-syll multie in this but thats the best thing about it


vs



Meth aka Liquid

Honestly I think you're gay, I don't really have a reason why
I feel it in my gut, and I'm pretty sure you scream that when you're w/ your guy

decent, pretty funny

Why are you always on my dick, are you planning to meet?
Since I'm super soap I hope I start rubbing off on u, because god damnit u stink

eh, random n kinda childish

I get pussy whenever, hit and quit then back to merkin nerds
For you one night stand just happens to be your week's quota sellin' furniture

yep, works for me.

Ask about me around the net, Meth's a go getter my friend
The only Story around the net about you is that you're not even better than him

meh, didn't hit

I buy chicks nice clothes, animal skins and they love to do me
The only time Atomic chaeuffer, is driving me and my crew to the movies

This was good, probably your best bar


v/ meth for better execution