Meth v Atomic - {Meth wins}

CymbiCort · 07-10-2013, 01:30 PM

Atomic, I'm not going to lie to you, I've seen you come harder than this before. I've seen your other shit and was generally impressed, but I honestly can't say the same for this verse. You had a couple of decent jabs, but nothing that really stood out to me. The line I felt the most from your verse was your opener, then I felt you gradually slipped up towards the end, almost like you stopped caring. With that being said, it still wasn't a bad verse, just needed more polishing.

Meth, first bar was OK but I liked Atomics opener better. the next bar, /meet/stink I felt it was a bit forced even though I know it rhymes, but you could of definitely rhymed it better IMO. Still a decent hit/concept.The next two bars weren't anything noteworthy but connected enough. It was the closer that gave Meth the win IMO, the chauffeur/show fur play was dope for sure, and it was a clear victory at this point for Meth.

V: Meth.

07-10-2013, 01:30 PM	#10
CymbiCort Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 184 Battle Record: 4-13 Rep Power: 37	Atomic, I'm not going to lie to you, I've seen you come harder than this before. I've seen your other shit and was generally impressed, but I honestly can't say the same for this verse. You had a couple of decent jabs, but nothing that really stood out to me. The line I felt the most from your verse was your opener, then I felt you gradually slipped up towards the end, almost like you stopped caring. With that being said, it still wasn't a bad verse, just needed more polishing. Meth, first bar was OK but I liked Atomics opener better. the next bar, /meet/stink I felt it was a bit forced even though I know it rhymes, but you could of definitely rhymed it better IMO. Still a decent hit/concept.The next two bars weren't anything noteworthy but connected enough. It was the closer that gave Meth the win IMO, the chauffeur/show fur play was dope for sure, and it was a clear victory at this point for Meth. V: Meth.