Karma v Lecture - {Lecture wins}

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@Karma @Lecture

[Lecture]

I'm done, I went 10.

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[Karma]

Ayt check.

[Lecture]

I know niggas is expectin..

Karma is a bitch lines, but nothing could be more inconsiderate
cause Karma is such a nice person.. the pussy aint ever killed shit
Open mics, topicals, battles, u name it & he aint smashin it
so its no surprise when I leave Kar wrecked like a traffic accident
I spit state of the art shit - classics that be defining the grades
u spit state of the art, shit.. fucked up schemes w/ lines that be played
Now karma is defined by what comes around goes around
this much is true
with that orbiting nature its proof ur battles dont revolve around u
I know where to put trash like urs, theres no need to get ill
week 16 only means your starting & ending with an L..

landfill.

[Karma]

Aiyo
I cory gunz size as twice that dude, I aint joke'n ..
one bullet'll hit & leave his mugshot on the news like snowden
So watch how u step'n, Bcos u aint that hard to murk
I can aswell leave bootprint on ur face & I dont even have to walk
Bitch my punchlines is gold, obviously people dug it
Oh gad, if people ever dig your shit is after I bury u faggit
& that win last week was by a hair's breadth, u shud thank god rookie
Without him it coulda gone 'The other way' like that malcolm movie
Plus gurls don't have time for u, they see him as less worth
If a chick ever say 'Whatsapp' she's just refer'n to a social network ..

[Flow]

'Whatsapp'

vs

traffic accident


Lecture you had some legit attempts but your execution was poor, its that or your struggling with your own concepts, there was one or two where the initial idea is good but the way you spun it was weak. And that opener just came across as a catty observation lol.

Karma - urgh... Poor spelling, really in your face statement type lines, you give the impression your a wanna be G... didn't really like anything you had and then was subtly surprised near the end with the legit attempts and that whatsapp was not that poor for a new face..

Vote lecture - for better attempts

[Slowhands]

L

Karma is a bitch lines, but nothing could be more inconsiderate
cause Karma is such a nice person.. the pussy aint ever killed shit
what? simplistic
Open mics, topicals, battles, u name it & he aint smashin it
so its no surprise when I leave Kar wrecked like a traffic accident
ok
I spit state of the art shit - classics that be defining the grades
u spit state of the art, shit.. fucked up schemes w/ lines that be played
meh
Now karma is defined by what comes around goes around
this much is true
with that orbiting nature its proof ur battles dont revolve around u
concept ok wording sucked
I know where to put trash like urs, theres no need to get ill
week 16 only means your starting & ending with an L..
nah

not a great verse, kar line was typical and the other was worded bad. the rest was average

K

I cory gunz size as twice that dude, I aint joke'n ..
one bullet'll hit & leave his mugshot on the news like snowden
set up sucked ass
So watch how u step'n, Bcos u aint that hard to murk
I can aswell leave bootprint on ur face & I dont even have to walk
what?
Bitch my punchlines is gold, obviously people dug it
Oh gad, if people ever dig your shit is after I bury u faggit
nope
& that win last week was by a hair's breadth, u shud thank god rookie
Without him it coulda gone 'The other way' like that malcolm movie
ok concept but not worded well
Plus gurls don't have time for u, they see him as less worth
If a chick ever say 'Whatsapp' she's just refer'n to a social network ..
nope

your verse was pure shit. spelling bad and shit wording doesn't make you good. reading your verse was hard and makes me want to punch a fucking kitten in the face.


vote lecture for not being AS shitty

[Gazette]

Karma is a bitch lines, but nothing could be more inconsiderate
cause Karma is such a nice person.. the pussy aint ever killed shit

ummm, i kinda get the karma / not killing idea but its tenuously delivered n didnt really hit

Open mics, topicals, battles, u name it & he aint smashin it
so its no surprise when I leave Kar wrecked like a traffic accident

kinna obvious one, something this simple is only made worse by using a 'like a' similie, shoulda been more creative w/ it

I spit state of the art shit - classics that be defining the grades
u spit state of the art, shit.. fucked up schemes w/ lines that be played

nice idea, needed a comma after the second 'u spit' ... n just generally better wording

Now karma is defined by what comes around goes around
this much is true
with that orbiting nature its proof ur battles dont revolve around u

ok, lovetap but alright

I know where to put trash like urs, theres no need to get ill
week 16 only means your starting & ending with an L..

meh. you came alot harder in our battle, this one feels rushed n thoughtless



Vs


I cory gunz size as twice that dude, I aint joke'n ..
one bullet'll hit & leave his mugshot on the news like snowden

cory? c'mon now, how you gonna set off w/ a good impression w/ that kinda error, you didnt read ur verse through before u posted it?
punch was alright though.

So watch how u step'n, Bcos u aint that hard to murk
I can aswell leave bootprint on ur face & I dont even have to walk

...

Bitch my punchlines is gold, obviously people dug it
Oh gad, if people ever dig your shit is after I bury u faggit

old, ooold concept. n this wasn't delivered well

& that win last week was by a hair's breadth, u shud thank god rookie
Without him it coulda gone 'The other way' like that malcolm movie

not bad, a bit simple

Plus gurls don't have time for u, they see him as less worth
If a chick ever say 'Whatsapp' she's just refer'n to a social network ..

nah, seen too many of these latelty

you had a couple concepts that coould have amounted to something if it weren't for bad wording, and the presentation was horrible, could just be me being picky but the spelling mistakes n messiness of it all was pretty off-putting


v/ lecture for an all round cleaner verse