Sharp Nine vs Cakedout - SHARP WINS 4-1

Atomic · 06-27-2013, 06:29 PM

u aint the real Brah. cant write to his effect
ur an imitation Cake that a diabetic would reject
simple, but worded very well.
ill have you gone. after this ull be way more than low-key
youll fadeaway so easily the Spurs'll wish you were playin that OT
ha, dece
i pull 5-7 range chicks. its not bad, n im not about that fake stuff.
but only girls wanna Mary Ca are hideous n cover themselves with makeup
okay.
this guy can die. dunno why he tried.
if anyone readin this battles feelin 'Dout, its cuz his verse made em think text finally died
hah, dece
you're ugly. doodily dweedley bop thats a lil scat.
if a girl sees u an says 'im feeling lucky', its cuz she typed hideous into google then hit that
lotb

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I got bars for the duke, His funeral becomes part of the news
So tools I might look to 'hand some' after I get sharp in a suit
connection seems kind of gay, but i get the bar & it's pretty solid.
That scope arc isn't new, if this shooter rifle pouring
Yall gone see nines on my feet w/o a jump man from Michael Jordan
lol meh, i actually don't mind gunplay but this was avg.
I bring nouns with grace that carry pounds of weights
You could be babe Ruth and still wouldn't be able to make it around this base
heh, ok.
Step up to the mat or plate, I'll strike you out w/ this fast ball on display
To show you when being the batter your still half of cake
mehhhhhh, okayy
You never been vicious or sick mate because you kept your cards held
mourning cruisers knows you wouldn't even put a sign in your ground hosting garage sells..
poorly worded, not feeling it tbh.

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overall sharp took this somewhat easily. cake ur verse wasn't bad @ all really, ur concepts are ok you just need to word them better, like ur 1st bars wording was flawless, but then the concepts got more stretched as the verse went on, def. not a bad verse tho. cool battle guys. v/ sharp

06-27-2013, 06:29 PM	#12
Atomic official hypedaddy. Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 951 Battle Record: 11-12 Champed - Sickeningly White Night VI - Longbar Heavyweight Belt (0x) - Shortbar Featherweight Belt (0x) Rep Power: 0	u aint the real Brah. cant write to his effect ur an imitation Cake that a diabetic would reject simple, but worded very well. ill have you gone. after this ull be way more than low-key youll fadeaway so easily the Spurs'll wish you were playin that OT ha, dece i pull 5-7 range chicks. its not bad, n im not about that fake stuff. but only girls wanna Mary Ca are hideous n cover themselves with makeup okay. this guy can die. dunno why he tried. if anyone readin this battles feelin 'Dout, its cuz his verse made em think text finally died hah, dece you're ugly. doodily dweedley bop thats a lil scat. if a girl sees u an says 'im feeling lucky', its cuz she typed hideous into google then hit that lotb // I got bars for the duke, His funeral becomes part of the news So tools I might look to 'hand some' after I get sharp in a suit connection seems kind of gay, but i get the bar & it's pretty solid. That scope arc isn't new, if this shooter rifle pouring Yall gone see nines on my feet w/o a jump man from Michael Jordan lol meh, i actually don't mind gunplay but this was avg. I bring nouns with grace that carry pounds of weights You could be babe Ruth and still wouldn't be able to make it around this base heh, ok. Step up to the mat or plate, I'll strike you out w/ this fast ball on display To show you when being the batter your still half of cake mehhhhhh, okayy You never been vicious or sick mate because you kept your cards held mourning cruisers knows you wouldn't even put a sign in your ground hosting garage sells.. poorly worded, not feeling it tbh. // overall sharp took this somewhat easily. cake ur verse wasn't bad @ all really, ur concepts are ok you just need to word them better, like ur 1st bars wording was flawless, but then the concepts got more stretched as the verse went on, def. not a bad verse tho. cool battle guys. v/ sharp Last edited by Atomic; 06-27-2013 at 09:44 PM.