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Sharp Nine vs Cakedout - SHARP WINS 4-1

@Cakedout

10 due asap

@Cakedout

key 4 u <3 <3 <3

u aint the real Brah. cant write to his effect
ur an imitation Cake that a diabetic would reject
ill have you gone. after this ull be way more than low-key
youll fadeaway so easily the Spurs'll wish you were playin that OT
i pull 5-7 range chicks. its not bad, n im not about that fake stuff.
but only girls wanna Mary Ca are hideous n cover themselves with makeup
this guy can die. dunno why he tried.
if anyone readin this battles feelin 'Dout, its cuz his verse made em think text finally died
you're ugly. doodily dweedley bop thats a lil scat.
if a girl sees u an says 'im feeling lucky', its cuz she typed hideous into google then hit that

I got bars for the duke, His funeral becomes part of the news
So tools I might look to 'hand some' after I get sharp in a suit
That scope arc isn't new, if this shooter rifle pouring
Yall gone see nines on my feet w/o a jump man from Michael Jordan
I bring nouns with grace that carry pounds of weights
You could be babe Ruth and still wouldn't be able to make it around this base
Step up to the mat or plate, I'll strike you out w/ this fast ball on display
To show you when being the batter your still half of cake
You never been vicious or sick mate because you kept your cards held
mourning cruisers knows you wouldn't even put a sign in your ground hosting garage sells..

Yo @Cakedout good shit dude, don't forget to vote on two battles and put links in this thread

Yo I will def get back to you both with some breakdowns (if you want it) but for now my vote is going to sharp for some fresh quotables like the feeling lucky google line the opener and the line about doubt and text died. << shit was awesome.

Props your verse caked it was pretty good I don't think ive peeped you before - keep up

Vote sharpino

I gotta vote for Sharp...

Both verses were decent but Sharp started it and ended better and had more clever punches than the other dood.

I'd say the other had a little bit more structure because Sharp had came with a key.... If his punches had more hit to them I'm sure he would've gave Sharp a run for his money.

2-0 Sharp. More votes.

Sharp Nine you needto polish your verses more, to much filler in them to be effective.

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you're ugly. doodily dweedley bop thats a lil scat.
if a girl sees u an says 'im feeling lucky', its cuz she typed hideous into google then hit that

I see what you were doing with the concept but it didn't hit as hard as it could of.

Quote:

ill have you gone. after this ull be way more than low-key
youll fadeaway so easily the Spurs'll wish you were playin that OT

That was coo.

Cakedout had more a solid verse, few bars it felt like you took off but w/e.

Quote:

That scope arc isn't new, if this shooter rifle pouring
Yall gone see nines on my feet w/o a jump man from Michael Jordan

Setup could of been better but coo punch

Quote:

I got bars for the duke, His funeral becomes part of the news
So tools I might look to 'hand some' after I get sharp in a suit

Dopest line of the battle.

Vote: Cakedout

u aint the real Brah. cant write to his effect
ur an imitation Cake that a diabetic would reject
simple, but worded very well.
ill have you gone. after this ull be way more than low-key
youll fadeaway so easily the Spurs'll wish you were playin that OT
ha, dece
i pull 5-7 range chicks. its not bad, n im not about that fake stuff.
but only girls wanna Mary Ca are hideous n cover themselves with makeup
okay.
this guy can die. dunno why he tried.
if anyone readin this battles feelin 'Dout, its cuz his verse made em think text finally died
hah, dece
you're ugly. doodily dweedley bop thats a lil scat.
if a girl sees u an says 'im feeling lucky', its cuz she typed hideous into google then hit that
lotb

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I got bars for the duke, His funeral becomes part of the news
So tools I might look to 'hand some' after I get sharp in a suit
connection seems kind of gay, but i get the bar & it's pretty solid.
That scope arc isn't new, if this shooter rifle pouring
Yall gone see nines on my feet w/o a jump man from Michael Jordan
lol meh, i actually don't mind gunplay but this was avg.
I bring nouns with grace that carry pounds of weights
You could be babe Ruth and still wouldn't be able to make it around this base
heh, ok.
Step up to the mat or plate, I'll strike you out w/ this fast ball on display
To show you when being the batter your still half of cake
mehhhhhh, okayy
You never been vicious or sick mate because you kept your cards held
mourning cruisers knows you wouldn't even put a sign in your ground hosting garage sells..
poorly worded, not feeling it tbh.

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overall sharp took this somewhat easily. cake ur verse wasn't bad @ all really, ur concepts are ok you just need to word them better, like ur 1st bars wording was flawless, but then the concepts got more stretched as the verse went on, def. not a bad verse tho. cool battle guys. v/ sharp

u aint the real Brah. cant write to his effect
ur an imitation Cake that a diabetic would reject

Against

I bring nouns with grace that carry pounds of weights
You could be babe Ruth and still wouldn't be able to make it around this base

Alright verses from both you, definitely liked both. Sharp just had better crafted punches

Sharp