Jew Story

Advocate · 06-24-2013, 11:20 PM

Damn?! I gotta say that was a story I wasn't expecting. Lol the Jews strike back! It was a good drop, especially considering it was your first one on the site. I appreciate the feedback you had gave me on my latest post. It's always nice to get constructive advice, and I try to give that back to those who do so. Lol but back to your post, I wasn't sure if it was a rhyme or poetry. The only thing I'm gonna tell you is work on how you structure your post. Other than that, it was still a good read and you demonstrated good illustration wit your words. Keep it up!

06-24-2013, 11:20 PM	#2
Advocate Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Harlem, NY Posts: 57 Rep Power: 37	Damn?! I gotta say that was a story I wasn't expecting. Lol the Jews strike back! It was a good drop, especially considering it was your first one on the site. I appreciate the feedback you had gave me on my latest post. It's always nice to get constructive advice, and I try to give that back to those who do so. Lol but back to your post, I wasn't sure if it was a rhyme or poetry. The only thing I'm gonna tell you is work on how you structure your post. Other than that, it was still a good read and you demonstrated good illustration wit your words. Keep it up!