XI WK II: Universe (1-0) vs. Scar (0-1) (UNIVERSE WINS 5-1)

brokenhal0 · 12-12-2022, 08:20 AM

universe - at his best that's how it's done on point in every area

scar - some of this sounded reads like dialogue
its not rhymeable it lacked flow or ''bboyism'' in certain areas
i felt you killed momentum of some epic shit which made it read
like a story written in a book instead of a hip hop verse
but there were moments of brilliance in certain lines just wished it had more hiphop style then story style
my opinion

mvgt- universe

12-12-2022, 08:20 AM	#1
brokenhal0 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 523 Battle Record: 12-12=4 Champed - AOWL Season IX Rep Power: 3891097	universe - at his best that's how it's done on point in every area scar - some of this sounded reads like dialogue its not rhymeable it lacked flow or ''bboyism'' in certain areas i felt you killed momentum of some epic shit which made it read like a story written in a book instead of a hip hop verse but there were moments of brilliance in certain lines just wished it had more hiphop style then story style my opinion mvgt- universe Last edited by brokenhal0; 12-12-2022 at 08:24 AM.