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12-12-2022, 12:41 AM
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univ - solid verse as always, a little rereading rereading rereading to keep focused which can be rough but we patient. good flows. I think the ending was a lot weak than the first part.
scar - some sloppy, needed edits, hope you're feeling better. good imagery, clear to see where we were, great twist totally missed it, but the end plummeted hard. mvgt universe |
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