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#3161 |
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If there's heartache, part ways, love is lethargic
Sidewinding through hallways, hard days Have you psychotic, diabolical drawn face Narcotics are a strong base for my neurotic Crawlspace |
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#3162 |
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a defiant punk solely seeking guidance from violent bums
as my eyelids close my mind is one with the silent hum absinthe and applesauce back and forth a lack of love got me jackin off to kalashnikovs you're looking kinda frigid, feel heat my bars emit spreading fierce fire like some arsonist narcissist ready to operate and dissect, it's straight surgery btw hope you're doing well, pardon the fake curtesy whatever my pen's tasked with, find targets then advance in taking out competitors one at a time like a zen assassin rebel - get served, challenge C you got a hell of a nerve only said I'll be-game to battle as in the level you deserve you aint testing this killer always wrecking down pillars refusing to see the light like triggered whiggers checkin out mirrors now as a triflin act you contemplate fighting back reappearing with a double account twice as wack you're acting all moody, so I find it rather soothing to just punch you out cold, call it a mood swing several blows permanently damaging temporal lobes shining like emerald glow on you basement dwellers blatant failures clearly being misled by red herrings you seem kinda slow - better check your bearings or try some nuance, fix your glasses, get new ones flexing inferior texts only makes you sub-human as in a weirdo striving to maintain a well kept look catch you at the library reading self-help books whatever you drop greeted with relentless silence attacks lack any point, bars literally senseless violence coming to complexity, I'm taking this to new places crafting intricate lines while you struggle tying shoe laces your life the unsung saga, abused by your drunk mama therapy may resolved issues, now you get blunt traumas bad guy of mankind, I put killers in the dirt like landmines enlightened at the grand shrine, recognized buddhas gangsign and those endless tirades is just to much to handle son you call it freestyling, sane people only hear you ramble on cos demented and vague lines tend to make poor sense I know my way around a pen, you're literally too dense |
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#3163 |
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Impression of you, first attempt:
Ahem Rambling on, scrambling while rambling on A fan of me, nah, so candidly, hah, handling on Straddling songs, paddling on, babbling on How to be long on tragedy songs glad to be on The rambling on, scrambling while rambling on |
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#3164 |
low tide in serotonin bay
Join Date: Jul 2013
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Hey guys I’m writing a book of poetry A BOOK OF POETRY
But my rhyming still fluid as the ocean, ebb and flow with me It’s the bad guy, reason for all the idols’ tragic falls Travis Touchdown, there’s no more heroes because I slashed em all No matter the league, i dash in and shatter expectations I got the no days off mentality and they planning next vacations Scatterbrained ass child, blame my mother’s addiction The semblance of legends dope without poppin prescriptions Gotten to the point I don’t even need caffeine just love the way coffee tastes Thank Taylor Swift and Dan Campbell for the way my brain operates |
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#3165 |
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now who is this yapping geek attacking me
impersonating a pro with some weak quackery going Wilde with the sincerest form of flattery a rather generic diss I posted my verse to be perhaps that's why you took it so personally now I havent been very active on netcees tho I ain't complaing, let's see.. a credible writer like adverse said he's was a fan then justrap just presented himself as a stan guess it's enough to dismiss you with a shorter verse you're so dull even universe would be lost for words Last edited by Concrete; 08-25-2022 at 11:24 PM. |
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#3166 |
low tide in serotonin bay
Join Date: Jul 2013
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Not here to fraternize I shatter guys when my mitts fly
Y’all making waves ain’t nothing compared to this riptide As a kid, I wasn’t gifted with that natural rhythm So I was battering pads, pens and any beat I could make with pans in the kitchen My mad indecision left the boat for higher learning sailing But no matter I’m still the baddest dude in these bars, word to felons You snowflakes with guns? If that shit goes POW your wrist gives out Me? I’m coming with swords to slit your clowns leave you disemboweled |
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#3167 |
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across the forsaken board dark clouds assemble
as I emerge victorious from the shrouded temple casually strolling and making the grounds tremble the mark of a proud emblem, anointed black flag dropping squares all day like annoying hashtags see back in the day nerds got bashed in their brains now a fashionable trend equals glasses with frames seeking status to gain spouting whatever in-phrase rocking skate-shoes that never even touched griptape completely bitchmade, taking the random right stand having a wide stance while wearing those tight pants needs a slap from the right hand, damn savvy rappers sacrificing art for some flashy swagger, or caffè latte merely crappy actors reading from simple scriptures only complex things put on display is mental issues by all means, seize the theme of your day-dreams even if the same scene is currently the main stream become wealthy, rich - I can't label you a selfish prick now fake a smile before I smack you with the selfie-stick Last edited by Concrete; 08-28-2022 at 01:21 AM. |
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#3168 | |
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In order to get a nod you'd have to be a god You can't even get applause from the mods Cause your skill is a facade you're an inferior fraud More unstable than play dough so I press And you smash into the concrete as I laugh I got bars of steel, bitch call me Steven seagal Cause I'm hard to kill it wouldn't be even at all I'd pick off this oddball without ever grieving at all Concrete facts, your long weak raps are nothing but trash I'm a titan so if you coming to clash you better go for blood Or your weak ass will just get swept under the rug... |
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#3169 |
low tide in serotonin bay
Join Date: Jul 2013
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Punishment dished out to anyone who gets my name drug through the mud
Sleepin on me get you fucked, I’m Huxtable bruh Throw barrages of punches, enemies fall by the hundreds Get you served like raw fish, but I’m even harder to stomach Classy as a Harvard luncheon, I’m armed for gunnin Bullets leave you with a red head like the Archies’ frontman Took dude’s advice before me and just rapped, bars harder than concrete God would have a hard time boxing me with this long reach |
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#3170 | |
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you again? so you still wanna mess with me kid it's just pesky screaming from a petty weakling I'm not a deity but you're clearly a lesser being can't cause me dread, that horse is dead think I need applause from mods you must need a pause from meds get sane bro, at the very least lay low you may be unstable clay but I don't play tho can't flip names for shit, let me show you fool: "concrete because everybody walks all over you" a quick punch since you seem to be a bit stuck first reaction to your last print was: "shit sucks" still this creepy joker keep on sneaking closer not completely wack, he's exceptionally mediocre can't shine on the board with the mind of a bore hard to kill, sure cos reading your verse is kind of a chore this little scuffle is not getting exciting at this point I rather see more sinacog writings please, just-quit - you can't win this for your life btw, thanks for wasting minutes of my life |
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#3171 |
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Join Date: Jun 2013
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you will never get rid of me directly or specifically
if i vanish that aint no mystery ill return in 7 days and bring the whole solar system into me ill be alright a real light to liberty maybe a real lie to misery mysterious paranormal activity is found in my musical ministry conditions be slippery in the valleys of mystery's i moon walk while your ankle breaks walking to the fruit store those vibes that I move for will tune forks to find water instantly broke all ancient pacts of infamy let the soul of the world fly into me i died instantly revived by a tribe of lives i lived separately mystically that's a myriad which invisibly manages most mostly that myriad all work for the same gathering post rattle your skull for the lack of the cults the sacred breathe that builds castles on clouds that'll float. Last edited by brokenhal0; 09-06-2022 at 10:04 PM. |
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#3172 |
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Explosive wit, and I got that corrosive shit
I'll give you a dose of sick with that covid spit And I swear to god like a jehovah's witness My motives lit by the wick from my opponent's Writs, stack ammo and load the clip, I'll show the bitch The flow I flip just so they know I'm in control Of this, kicking ass and this is my dojo kid My mother fuckin mojo's big, give me kudos Bro, or it's your career I'll have to judo throw You wont like where this feud'll go, unsuitable Shoot you in the noodle with my music, cold As the mountains when I get upset and lose it tho Spark a rap war with my talents, darkness trapped for The light to rebalance, going hardcore bananas hoe Peel back your dress and slam the damn, I cant it's Too rated R for my family, oh my God we'll manage Got off track but now I'm back to do the damage Man cut the track off and let these jack offs Soak in the verbal mechanics, and fuck the world As I hurdle the god damn planet to me like a magnet Chop these bars like a hatchet, Indian give The spotlight and take it back like Apaches... There just ain't no one to match me, slow or at speed So give up the mic and I'll spare you a tragic Ending, you can't defend against me you faggots Better chill before you tempt me to take a stab at Making yall mince meat and cooking with intensity In an industry that wont let you live down the slaughter I give to these, whack rappers and my enemies Cause I dont stay static, I condense the seeds Of my sins and breathe fire like a fuckin dragon... |
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#3173 |
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When I fulfill a scheme I'm a machine that is killing things
A villain king on the scene building steam, full of myself But still hungry for the dream, spitting clean do not intervene Or its guillotine to your team, the enemies Energy has me mentally demented see, its revenge I seek I'm intense at peak, never diminishing on the M.I.C. And when I sweep between different speeds Yall weak emcees will weep and freeze, leap and squeeze The glock, pull the trigger, creep to hell and rot... Peep the sales in shock, platinum, diamond, rocks Deep inhale the pot, freak females are hot Slap the hind end, walk, and remind them thots I'm the master, boss, extreme crafter, crossed Supreme rapper, stop.... |
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#3174 |
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I'd like to cash in on that ass, dollar bill and two quarters will rearrange it
To make cents when I smash on video Oh yeah Fuck that Iggy hoe Last edited by JustRap; 08-30-2022 at 12:16 PM. Reason: Reworded |
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#3175 |
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found myself venturing on a mind-blowing journey
straight into a damned fire glowing furnace that fiery lake eternal known as the inferno I saw them burn slow, sinners with crooked eyes never to be found in the book of life seeing legions of demons, can't breathe in this region contemplated my reasons for being a heathen insolently laughing at priests when asked to believe now I'm trapped in disbelief - gnashing my teeth what the hell happened to me? my soul is pissed the love of God knocked on my door, supposedly hopelessly, I never had the heart to open it focusing on past traditions I was sad to witness they said the Son of God was the path to wisdom lacking vision I declared it a bastards religion got facts twisted and felt the wrath of christians the sacrilegious do time in everlasting prisons damnit, I should have listened.. wait damn a minute... me accepting this ordeal is unthinkable my fate may be perpetually sealed as misarable still, I refuse to yield on my principles |
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#3176 |
The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
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Hey, hey look what the pen did to you.
All the trips to the other realms & metaphysical... Took their toll..its slowly digging into you. Each psychotic episode is mere ritual. It's all up "here" and depends on what you listen to. Ready? Set. Engage with every thought political. Every swift change in life taken too literal. Shades of grey & hues of white begin to glisten through. You set the standard now, wow, you did it dude! Shit, you aren't even proud of how you did it too... Look at the scope and examine what you living through. Post grad lad scraping by as living proof. That's twice as much needed to guide the skeptical. Shit that might be forgettable, high off edible. Type of rhyme that blindside's the blessings. Views from the highrise got me feeling so intentional. I feel like I just might die off medical.... But that recreational side got me on so much greens... I think I've turned into a vegetable
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#3177 |
low tide in serotonin bay
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Smooth as the harmonica in the intro of piano man
Hard pressed to press you bitches like a mammogram ONE for the victims when I pull up and let the ammo blam TWO for me finishing the job, pulling up beside the ambulance Hell yeah the kid’s cocky, this swagger shit my steez You biters always droppin someone else’s shit like disc jockeys I don’t have to tap into the Aesop Rock plain of my rhyming ability Genetically predisposed to be better then whoever say they killin me Illustrate the illest traits, making a buzz like distilleries You make a Buzz like Lightyear, all it takes a couple faggots to kill your dreams |
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#3179 |
LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS
Join Date: Aug 2014
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I’m still breaking down your verse
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#3180 |
low tide in serotonin bay
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Yo Adverse never been a dude getting hella chickadees
Honestly Frank is on my dick more than the bitches be Crying corruption and faggotry is part the reason I hate runnin leagues So hard to stay sucker free though I earned stripes like a bumblebee Still resting in a higher plain, higher than you bums can see Finals MVP and y’all the weakest link in the summer league My pen is the sword, lately feeling like Pendleton Ward Creating mad universes so that I never get bored Ready for war, bring to any big headed residents of boards Better than before it ain’t nothing to leave em effortlessly tore |
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