WEEK FOURTEEN CHAMP MATCH: NYCSPITZ (7-2) vs EVICTION (9-3) NYC WINS 4-0

brokenhal0 · 07-29-2022, 12:23 AM

Eviction - Not your best but definitely on point after reading your verses all these weeks i can tell when your on and while this was a good written with good flow
it did lack a bit of detail and some bars felt a bit forced and lacked the emotional connection that you tend to introduce in your characters.

NYC - Not your best either but i feel like your story had more focus and content
then your opponent lyrically some of it was a bit choppy but after last weeks battle theres no need to get that deep I feel like you matched your opponents energy with a more interesting story and that was enough for the W.

MVGT - NYCSPITZ close one here

07-29-2022, 12:23 AM	#6
brokenhal0 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 523 Battle Record: 12-12=4 Champed - AOWL Season IX Rep Power: 3891097	Eviction - Not your best but definitely on point after reading your verses all these weeks i can tell when your on and while this was a good written with good flow it did lack a bit of detail and some bars felt a bit forced and lacked the emotional connection that you tend to introduce in your characters. NYC - Not your best either but i feel like your story had more focus and content then your opponent lyrically some of it was a bit choppy but after last weeks battle theres no need to get that deep I feel like you matched your opponents energy with a more interesting story and that was enough for the W. MVGT - NYCSPITZ close one here