WEEK THIRTEEN: BROKENHAL0 (6-5) vs ADVERSE (5-3) HAL0 WINS 3-0

Eviction · 07-17-2022, 10:49 AM

Dope picture, Idk I get pirrates of the carbean vibes, or maybe just pirrates in general.
The general theme is fire/smoke this season I see

Halo
Damn opening was "fire" I liked the sip rum and wash away the smoke part, opens this up with a nice picture, I was hoping you would continue woith the consolodated stone/concentrated gold scheme that would have been nice, the rest of the rhyming was okay, the covered in flames section was also cool, schemes stayed on point, I think this is your best verse all season and would have beaten me tbh.

Adverse
My favorite quote from your piece was The thing about exploring new territories is you don’t know where the villains live, the drew a blade and slashed his throat section was sick, and fought like how to survive, not as long as your other schemes but this read smooth, the ending was kind of ridiculous and kind of funny, like adverse summoned me here part, the NFT part was ridiculous and I can't understand where that fits, I get an image of butters now haha.

v/ halo
adverse obvisouly phoned it in at the end, it's cool to do experiments like that but don't do that shit in the playoffs LOL.

07-17-2022, 10:49 AM	#6
Eviction Detained Join Date: Oct 2020 Posts: 1,838 Battle Record: 16-11 Rep Power: 0	Dope picture, Idk I get pirrates of the carbean vibes, or maybe just pirrates in general. The general theme is fire/smoke this season I see Halo Damn opening was "fire" I liked the sip rum and wash away the smoke part, opens this up with a nice picture, I was hoping you would continue woith the consolodated stone/concentrated gold scheme that would have been nice, the rest of the rhyming was okay, the covered in flames section was also cool, schemes stayed on point, I think this is your best verse all season and would have beaten me tbh. Adverse My favorite quote from your piece was The thing about exploring new territories is you don’t know where the villains live, the drew a blade and slashed his throat section was sick, and fought like how to survive, not as long as your other schemes but this read smooth, the ending was kind of ridiculous and kind of funny, like adverse summoned me here part, the NFT part was ridiculous and I can't understand where that fits, I get an image of butters now haha. v/ halo adverse obvisouly phoned it in at the end, it's cool to do experiments like that but don't do that shit in the playoffs LOL.