WEEK TWELVE CHAMP MATCH: FRANK (6-1) vs DEAD MAN (1-0) DEAD MAN WINS 5-1

brokenhal0 · 07-10-2022, 09:30 PM

Frank by not simplifying your verse this week...you may have shot yourself in the foot
deadmans verse was a perfect example of when less is more it kept me engaged and the wordplay was what I would expect from a top writer... while i thought your concept was dope some rhymes did come off a bit forced it was also kinda similar to the verse u had written a few weeks back in our battle i dont know if that was done on purpose which is cool to carry over the characters but it just did not keep me as engaged as deadmans verse very close battle
i can see how frank can scoop the vote with his writing style alone but if imma go bar for bar and cut out all the fancy stuff deadman got it by a smidgen

mvgt - Deadman by a hair

07-10-2022, 09:30 PM	#1
brokenhal0 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 523 Battle Record: 12-12=4 Champed - AOWL Season IX Rep Power: 3891097	Frank by not simplifying your verse this week...you may have shot yourself in the foot deadmans verse was a perfect example of when less is more it kept me engaged and the wordplay was what I would expect from a top writer... while i thought your concept was dope some rhymes did come off a bit forced it was also kinda similar to the verse u had written a few weeks back in our battle i dont know if that was done on purpose which is cool to carry over the characters but it just did not keep me as engaged as deadmans verse very close battle i can see how frank can scoop the vote with his writing style alone but if imma go bar for bar and cut out all the fancy stuff deadman got it by a smidgen mvgt - Deadman by a hair