WEEK EIGHT: BROKENHAL0 (3-3) vs MR. J (0-1) HAL0 WINS VIA NS

Adverse · 05-23-2022, 11:20 PM

AOWL Season X WEEK EIGHT

@brokenhal0 @Mr. J

Verse Due: FRIDAY MAY 27TH @ 11:59PM

Line min: 10

Max: 40

Rules: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=150311

Topic:

GOOD LUCK

brokenhal0 · 05-29-2022, 12:38 AM

''Two Sides To The Nowhere Monster''

Staring at the pearly gates with bleeding legs fleeting moments
knowing they deserved what they got stay out the kitchen don't stir the pot
In the crimson dawn I see planet X a suit fit for a king metallic flesh
inner city's where they banished sex call the paramedics next
I hid the guns near a pheasants nest esoteric text
scribbled in blood on checkered steps stand tall in the test of time
the thoughts of a mass shooter before he kills whats left inside..

Don't attempt to run you better hide or fight to take his gun
when he steps inside
don't make a sound listen to his steps and slide
try to defend best you can you wont feel nothing from the adrenaline
use a weapon instead of hands
only 2 hours ago I was waking up in a bed of lies
he feeds off the thoughts that are dead inside
duck under the desk for fun remember playing dead is wise
that's when I reflect on times when I ate his lunch
and took his change for the bus laughed in his face as I kissed his crush
beginners luck now my deeds come back in a bigger truck
I see him at the corner of the door his eyes are glazed like he saw a war
all i hear is paw paw paw
then pop pop pop i felt my skull split split split like a coconut im getting
chopped chopped chopped ears ring then there's no sound waking up next to my body
my spirit is earthbound stuck here forever roaming school hallways pulling cheerleaders skirts down..

You think its about being ignored typical teens undersexed
and self absorbed so rebellious yet self assured
Oh yea its getting gory o yea your getting yours
principal on the loud speaker screams lock the doors
scores of youth running in chaotic fashion the weak ones getting trampled
im starting fires in the cafeteria doors swing open as smoke fills the hall
this automatic rifle is an extension of angst picking off targets
like crickets in a chameleons tank
all black camouflage teflon vest in riot gear
as I stare down sights i can hear the sirens near
no justice just the lust inside killing all the faculty who ignored my cries
using the M16 my uncle brought back from iraq when I was 5 ..

Crying teachers pleading for there lives blood drips by the liter
your kids have been brainwashed im the clean up crew for those vile creatures
degenerate parents and you wonder why he dies for high priced sneakers
first they try to reason with no restraint the trigger was pulled with no delay
one shot is all it took to see a human become an anatomy display
foggy trauma the blood splattered on a puzzled nerd with freckles
vomiting on his bag of utz pretzels near the desk a dusty red apple
represented murder in the pursuit of knowledge.

A security guard who wrestled in high school and college
went for a double leg take down I pulled the trigger
the bullet shattered his optic nerve lay down on the ground astounded
tattooed muscles with no brains for omelettes
I was a track star I run quick powder burns
from making my own gun kits let off a whole drum kit running up the stairs
pipe bombs and anarchy the cookbook of a deranged teen gaining some clarity
you can always beat a bully with a bullet right between the eyes
don't believe the bullshit such outcomes wont lead to kosher meatless chili...

I walk out the entrance still wearing my trench coat my hands glowing
red from the radioactive comet that crashed in my window
as i start growing in height tentacles and claws the national guard
firing there arms i got teeth and beastly jaws in mere seconds
I was the size of a city mall looking like a melted a squid
hairy scales and gila monster skin and the viscosity of my slimy coat
was 2 feet thick with caustic juices melting everything that's moving
the disgusting beast that grows inside the hatred the control and lies
a giant handsome octopus with 6 spider eyes and 7 past lives
gonna plant my offspring in this city to thrive
kidnapped all the hot earth woman and put em in my hive
we need a hero to kill the beast under these darkened skies

With a vest of bombs im hiding in a vestibule
I packed at school the day prior to detonate live on channel 7 news
liar say your prayers imma kill the monster and the hero
screaming stop we got you surrounded I set the timer 30 seconds to zero
as I jump from the roof onto the beast 5 seconds and counting ...BOOOM...
schools out ghouls down floating to the ground like confetti like putting spaghetti in a blender
im the monster im the victim im the shooter tombstone reads no one worthy to remember......

05-23-2022, 11:20 PM	#1
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,748 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446143	WEEK EIGHT: BROKENHAL0 (3-3) vs MR. J (0-1) HAL0 WINS VIA NS AOWL Season X WEEK EIGHT @brokenhal0 @Mr. J Verse Due: FRIDAY MAY 27TH @ 11:59PM Line min: 10 Max: 40 Rules: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=150311 Topic: GOOD LUCK

05-29-2022, 12:38 AM	#2
brokenhal0 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 494 Battle Record: 12-12=4 Champed - AOWL Season IX Rep Power: 455117	''Two Sides To The Nowhere Monster'' Staring at the pearly gates with bleeding legs fleeting moments knowing they deserved what they got stay out the kitchen don't stir the pot In the crimson dawn I see planet X a suit fit for a king metallic flesh inner city's where they banished sex call the paramedics next I hid the guns near a pheasants nest esoteric text scribbled in blood on checkered steps stand tall in the test of time the thoughts of a mass shooter before he kills whats left inside.. Don't attempt to run you better hide or fight to take his gun when he steps inside don't make a sound listen to his steps and slide try to defend best you can you wont feel nothing from the adrenaline use a weapon instead of hands only 2 hours ago I was waking up in a bed of lies he feeds off the thoughts that are dead inside duck under the desk for fun remember playing dead is wise that's when I reflect on times when I ate his lunch and took his change for the bus laughed in his face as I kissed his crush beginners luck now my deeds come back in a bigger truck I see him at the corner of the door his eyes are glazed like he saw a war all i hear is paw paw paw then pop pop pop i felt my skull split split split like a coconut im getting chopped chopped chopped ears ring then there's no sound waking up next to my body my spirit is earthbound stuck here forever roaming school hallways pulling cheerleaders skirts down.. You think its about being ignored typical teens undersexed and self absorbed so rebellious yet self assured Oh yea its getting gory o yea your getting yours principal on the loud speaker screams lock the doors scores of youth running in chaotic fashion the weak ones getting trampled im starting fires in the cafeteria doors swing open as smoke fills the hall this automatic rifle is an extension of angst picking off targets like crickets in a chameleons tank all black camouflage teflon vest in riot gear as I stare down sights i can hear the sirens near no justice just the lust inside killing all the faculty who ignored my cries using the M16 my uncle brought back from iraq when I was 5 .. Crying teachers pleading for there lives blood drips by the liter your kids have been brainwashed im the clean up crew for those vile creatures degenerate parents and you wonder why he dies for high priced sneakers first they try to reason with no restraint the trigger was pulled with no delay one shot is all it took to see a human become an anatomy display foggy trauma the blood splattered on a puzzled nerd with freckles vomiting on his bag of utz pretzels near the desk a dusty red apple represented murder in the pursuit of knowledge. A security guard who wrestled in high school and college went for a double leg take down I pulled the trigger the bullet shattered his optic nerve lay down on the ground astounded tattooed muscles with no brains for omelettes I was a track star I run quick powder burns from making my own gun kits let off a whole drum kit running up the stairs pipe bombs and anarchy the cookbook of a deranged teen gaining some clarity you can always beat a bully with a bullet right between the eyes don't believe the bullshit such outcomes wont lead to kosher meatless chili... I walk out the entrance still wearing my trench coat my hands glowing red from the radioactive comet that crashed in my window as i start growing in height tentacles and claws the national guard firing there arms i got teeth and beastly jaws in mere seconds I was the size of a city mall looking like a melted a squid hairy scales and gila monster skin and the viscosity of my slimy coat was 2 feet thick with caustic juices melting everything that's moving the disgusting beast that grows inside the hatred the control and lies a giant handsome octopus with 6 spider eyes and 7 past lives gonna plant my offspring in this city to thrive kidnapped all the hot earth woman and put em in my hive we need a hero to kill the beast under these darkened skies With a vest of bombs im hiding in a vestibule I packed at school the day prior to detonate live on channel 7 news liar say your prayers imma kill the monster and the hero screaming stop we got you surrounded I set the timer 30 seconds to zero as I jump from the roof onto the beast 5 seconds and counting ...BOOOM... schools out ghouls down floating to the ground like confetti like putting spaghetti in a blender im the monster im the victim im the shooter tombstone reads no one worthy to remember...... Last edited by brokenhal0; 05-29-2022 at 12:46 AM.